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| Salor Earth 2006-06-15 ch 1,  | abuseElrond THE Peredhil, Not Elrond Perehil, Peredhil means half-elven, the what he is not who he is. Also it isn't Elrondillon it is Elrondion, Ion means son, 'Elrond-son', or 'son of Elrond'. The word for brother is gwador. Other than that I loved it. Great story. Sailor Earth |
| SiriusBlackFan2 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, I throughly enjoyed it. Thought your characterizations were great. I can just see his sons making Elrond nuts..enjoyed reading Glorfindel give Elrond a hard time. I noticed a few gramatical mistakes but nothing major. Just two mistakes in elvish.. --When the twins refer to Estel as their brother, it should be gwador nin not muindor nin..gwador means sworn brother..muindor means blood brother..since Estel is their "adopted" brother its gwador..same applies when Estel refers to the twins as his brothers --Peredhel is not Elrond's last name it's Eärendilion..Peredhel means "half elven" and when used wrong can be insulting... I loved your story and cannot wait to see more! |
| The Amazing Me 2006-03-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseMuahahahha...! I remember the burned hands thing. Sounded no more pleasant in the story than it did in the musing. Owies. :S Hehehehehe |
| DawnStrider 2006-03-13 ch 1, | abuseI immensely enjoyed reading this story. You've painted a nice family, Elrond is a great father, but he must have lost his mind sending those 3 out. Cant wait to read your next story. |