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T. A. Raskelt
2008-08-10
ch 11,
abuseAw...Sasuke's a secret romantic, and Kakashi understands his students that well! I'm getting really into this story. It's equally superb in comparison with all of your other writing.
Turtle Kid
2008-08-02
ch 17,
abuseAw, this is so cute! Well, I mean, the story was angsty quite a bit before, but with the kitten it's gotten into the cute area!

Thanks for the difference in stories. Most stories start out with them at least knowing they like guys, or don't mind guys, or find the the other person secretly attractive, or something. Kudos to you for originality! (Of course, I'm only basing this story off of the ones I've read. I haven't read them all, and don't know all the plots.)

Just a thing I noticed, having read this story in two days: in chapter 15/14 you say that Iruka is 26, but in chapter 16/15 you say that he's 28.
charm2999
2008-07-29
ch 17,
abuseThis story is so awesome i cant wait for you to finish it!! The story is so worth the wait!
PleiadesWolfe
2008-07-20
ch 17,
abuseThis fic is good. I kind of like the bathhouse revelations a little better, but this one is good too. The kittens were really cute. I'm glad that they are starting to get along better. Hopefully something else will be able to happen soon to move them along.
SongoftheDarquePhoenix
2008-07-19
ch 17,
abuseGood fic, it goes at a good pace, not to fast, but not so slow that you lose interest. I'm sad that you're going on hiatus for awhile, but 'Bathhouse Revalations' is also a good fic, so...
Kiki Fairy
2008-07-15
ch 17,
abuseF-f-four to five months?!?! -looks at you like Jiriya just told Kakashi there'd never be another Icha Icha- The updates were slow as it was! TT^TT -cries-

(But I guess I do understand... And I'm being a hypocrite... -_-; But oh well, I guess...)

It IS good so far, though!
Kiki Fairy
2008-07-15
ch 14,
abuseUGH... Kakashi's gone EMO!Him going all on about, "I deserve everything I get... -insert emo noise here-" But it makes me laugh a little. ^_^
pleiadeswolfe
2008-07-15
ch 9, anon.
abuseMaybe have Naruto around will help them out.
pleiadeswolfe
2008-07-15
ch 8, anon.
abuseThis is not going to be fun for them, especially in the beginning. Hopefully they will be able to work something out.
pleiadeswolfe
2008-07-14
ch 7, anon.
abuseI hope those two figure something out soon to save them both a lot of heartache.
PleiadesWolfe
2008-07-14
ch 4,
abusePoor poor Kakashi. I really do feel bad for him.
PleiadesWolfe
2008-07-14
ch 3,
abuseI hope Kakashi figures it out soon to relieve some of his pain and guilt, but others will probably just pop up.
PleiadesWolfe
2008-07-14
ch 1,
abuseHopefully you will understand soon why you are so obsessed with Iruka, Kakashi. I can tell you it is not what you think. This was good. There were just a few mistakes. You did a pretty good job for learning your english through Harry Potter and the Final Fantasy games. Here are the mistakes...
"...Iruka thought was had just happened over..." needs to be changed to 'Iruka thought over what had just happened'
"The man kept gave him a funny feeling everytime they met..." needs to be changed to 'The man kept giving him a funny feeling everytime they met'
"...Copy nin knew that even him could make mistakes when portraying an ennemy..." needs to be changed to 'Copy nin knew that even he could make mistakes when portraying an enemy'
"...which seemed to annoy even more the Uchiha heir." needs to be changed to 'which seemed to annoy the Uchiha heir even more'
Good job though. That isn't very much compared to how long the chapter is and it is mostly grammar mistakes not spelling. I'm impressed.
24sakura
2008-05-20
ch 1,
abuseThe story is compelling, original, and very well written. Lunael's pen is one that focuses on the human soul, depicting the characters with maturity and depth, without being tedious. I truly hope she finishes this story!
Umino Zahira
2008-05-16
ch 17,
abuseXD
This chapter, too, was really funny and cute such as the last ones!^^
I wonder, what will happen in the last week Kakashi stays at Iruka's...
It's mean of you, to keep me (and the other readers waiting!
BUT, I love Bathhouse Revelations, too.
So...I'm glad you write on that story now.^^
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