 brigrove 2009-07-01 . chapter 31For some reason I had problems reviewing, but I loved the final chapters |
 brigrove 2009-07-01 . chapter 20very sweet |
 brigrove 2009-06-30 . chapter 14Great scene with Ron & Hermione and nice twist with the twins too. Didn't say earlier, but I thought the Ron - Harry talk was good too |
 musicmagic7 2009-02-25 . chapter 1Hey. This chapter was good. I was a little confused with the year. Is this after Siriu's daeth (5th year) or some time later? Will the story be canon 6th year? Those are my biggest ?'s. What i loved about it is ron's reaction throughout the chapter. He was angry and he slipped, but he wanted to take it back right then. Then he was upset. Then he seemed sort of resolved to it (as he listened to Harry and Hermione in the attic.) Then he accepted that he needed to apologize, though Hermione had said she wasn't sure she could forgive him. It makes for a good plot throughout. Keep up the great emotions but think about making small facts clearer.
Signed, mrs.carlislecullen5
P.S. (yes I reviewed a little late and the story is finished, but you can apply a criique to any story. );) |
 akshata 2008-09-04 . chapter 2 it some how does nt occur to me wen hermiony ended up sayin so many things y is she not being feelin guilty i dont know but i jus think she is selfish |
 lilbratty74 2008-07-29 . chapter 14OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! ITS MAKING ME CRY SO MUCH! I HAVE USED ALMOST A WHOLE TISSUE BOX ALREADY! I FEEL SO BAD FOR RON I MEAN HERMIONE IS TOTALLY OVEREACTING! JUST FORGIVE HIM FOR GODS SAKE! AND I NEARLY BURST OUT CRYING WHEN I READ THE PART WHEN RON GOES TO TALK TO HERMIONE! PLEASE DON'T GIVE UP RON! DON'T STOP FIGHTING! |
 Bluerain22 2008-05-15 . chapter 31I really enjoyed your story. Great Ron and Hermione, could they be any more stubborn!
Thank you for writing it. I can't wait to read the sequel to see some more R/H romance! |
 lostndconfused 2008-05-04 . chapter 31I loved it. I had to read it all in one day, it was so suspenseful. |
 LaughSpazm 2008-01-16 . chapter 31Ah! I loved that story so much. It was like addicting or something, I was like, must...read...next...chapter. It was really great! It was the epitome of taking two steps forward and one step back. It really was so good. I'm going to miss it :( |
 DizzlesScarlett 2008-01-16 . chapter 31And theres the Happily Ever after thats got me so Happy... Well.. since there sequels and stuff I can't really say I know about the Happily Ever after.. Yet...
As always an amazing story.. Amazing Writing... I'm off to the next fanfic.. I'm sure I'll be hearing from you soon.
*_-Lisa-_* |
 DizzlesScarlett 2008-01-16 . chapter 20I doubt I'll feel obligated to read the others, I'll probably be drawn to them, like I was to try your other stories.. I'm glad Bjorn and Esters stories turned out good.. Now if only Ron and Hermione.. I don't have time this morning to finish.. I'm already late for my first class as it will be... I must go.. But I will be back!
Till Then,
--Lisa |
 DizzlesScarlett 2008-01-15 . chapter 14I don't know why I do this to myself, but here I am again, completly enthralled in one of your stories. I Absolutly hate to leave this story on this chapter, especially after whats happened in this chapter, but I have no choice.. So instead of waiting till the last updated chapter like I normally do, I'm going to leave this comment here, and let you know I think your an incrediable writer... Even if I hate the fact that you end chapters in a way that keeps the story in my mind for days untill the next installment comes in.. And this case the next installments already here, yet I can't even read it... Oh my goodness.. Just.. I swear, never quit writing.! You've found yourself a very lasting fan.
--Lisa |
 Lorelai Grint 2007-12-05 . chapter 31This is so well written, I loved it... Congratulations on a great piece of work! |
 lucy2525 2007-11-28 . chapter 31i read the whole thing in one sitting.
all 31 chapters
and it was totally worth it.
..i don't even know what else to say.
it was just soo good!
i couldn't stop.
..
It's passed midnight...
i have work in the morning..
but instead of going to bed.
..i'm about to go to your profile
..to see if you have any other stories. |
 xox-emily-xox 2007-11-19 . chapter 31Omg! Your story was truly amazing! I must admit Ive seen it a few times and never opened it, purely because of the fact I couldnt bear to read something where Ron called Hermione a mudblood, but thankfully I decided to start reading - and Im glad I did!
I think the storyline was perfect, the Weasley One and Only idea was a lovely touch and the Dumstrang exchange was a great idea too! I was a total Bjorn/Ester shipper by the end of this story!:P
I loved how Hermiones letter with the I love you for the portkey was a key part of Rons escape:)
The ending was amazing, Im glad finally got together, and the touch of Harry and Ginny at the end was cute (:
Totally have to add this to my favourites [: |