come on what bout if Russel or Noodle sees dem layin there hm might give you something plus his whole hes not a gay thing or whatever what would they say about that especially russel maybe kong murdocs past is still unknown to 2d i dont really know but theres alot to do with this couple and how they would hide if theyre a couple or not you choose there are thousands of other choices just damn choose already

yay...i liked it but i still wanna see if the other two will notice the whole change in them

lol that was interesting

song...wtf shower...it was fricken awsome...though kind of a let down because it ended so quick

No it's really good and I really like rain scenes

okay., Its really good and here's what i think you should do next:
Since 2d was so so sad at first, in the beginning,let him have been secretly cutting his wrists- and when murdoc notices let them try to help him recover. as the story goes along they could go on an actual date? i know my idea sucked total butt but it was all i had. sorry.

Sheesh Murdocs a jerk!
Nice chapter! :D

you could just end it there adn add an epilogue, like a where are they now sorta deal, years later. happy ending is always nice ~.^

Loved it, nicely written, can't wait to read more!

One thiing. 2D's eyes aren't black, they're sunken in. 2D stands for "2 dents." Murdoc's fault.

OTHER THAN THAT, s'very cute :D

have 2d and murdoc fall deeply in love and have sex, then make it sad and have 2d cheat on him, and then they can get back together

You're not the only one man, I'm on writer's block myself XP I wish you the best though becsue it was getting hot. XDD

"IT'S A GIRL!"
Where do you come up with this stuff! Genius.

I laughed so hard...oh my god.

That was HAWT!!
And I love the vision of Murdoc just slinging 2D over his shoulder...hahaha. Love it.