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crimsonstain
2008-12-16 . chapter 8
Aww! Poor Ino-chan! She's getting jealous! lol...

Great story you have here, keep up the good work, and update soon!
SchizophrenicInsomniac
2008-11-21 . chapter 8
i love i love i love i love i love i love everything about this story
garsdal
2008-10-23 . chapter 8
now now ino, why are you so upset? you like the broody kid, remember?
a very good story that i'd like to se evolve.
Cyraxr
2008-10-17 . chapter 8
I like this story. It's start was little shaky but seemed to find where it was going about chapter seven. I hope you pick this story up again because I would like to see where it is going. I bet that Temari and Kankuro will team up with team seven to get the scroll and Gaara out. So please update soon. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.
Sakouya
2008-10-02 . chapter 8
cool story
King Hawke
2008-08-11 . chapter 8
cool! that is an interesting twist. hm...I have a feeling that Something is going to go wrong at the execution. keep writing! I love this story so far. you are a good writer.
asd123
2008-07-19 . chapter 8
Nice but i kinda got bored after some time but other then that its a vary good story and i would like to read more.

Also i would like to see a fight or somthing and not just talking.

Sorry.
Theo
2008-06-11 . chapter 8
Bushido no jutsu is one of my favorite stories I first discovered it a while a go and I've been waiting eagarly for the next chapter to come out, it's a great storie with lots of potential I hope you further expand on the story it would be a shame if you left it as is.
twilighthack
2008-05-26 . chapter 8
Sad to see this hasn't been updated in 2 years.

It's a pretty good story actually.
BLG
2008-05-15 . chapter 8
First off, I like your plot. It's interesting, and there are a lot of new ideas, at least to me. I think some of you're sentences are a bit too long, but that's just my opinion; what I mean is, instead of ending the sentence with a point, you sometimes combine many sentences into one with commas. But no offense, just something I noticed.

And you asked about pairings in the last chapter; I think a HinaLee one would be pretty... unusual. Hinata wouldn't be too disgusted by his appearance, I think, as she tolerated Naruto's bright orange jacket, and adding to that she likes the hardworking type. Lee hasn't seen Sakura yet, so that wouldn't be a problem right now, either. But then again, he doesn't know Hinata either. Poor shy Hinata. Gotta be a traumatizing experience. (I'm all like xD)

I'm looking forward to any chapters that might come after this one.
Cant Catch This
2008-04-19 . chapter 8
wow, this is a really good story. i thought you were going to do what almost every other auther dose when naruto passes the exam. you know where he still has to do a seccond test and steal the fobbidin scroll. and to make it into a mission naruto gose to and finds some compitition for ino. truly genius. awesome story continue this story please!
Jiran
2008-04-03 . chapter 8
I like this story. Very good base idea, and the execution is done rather well too. I hope you pull it off of sabbatical some time. This has a lot of potential.
the doctor
2008-02-15 . chapter 8
I belive there should another chapter.
DeltaKyuubi
2008-01-13 . chapter 8
cool cant wait to you update
chaosakatsuki
2008-01-06 . chapter 7
Damn... I know this story is on hold... but
I STILL MISS IT SO MUCH!!
I guess that having Dueling Harmonies back up helps, though...
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