 marco1094 2006-06-28 . chapter 18That was a sad ending!
Will wait for your sequel! |
 marco1094 2006-06-06 . chapter 17As usual, very very good uppie. |
 marco1094 2006-05-21 . chapter 16Wow! The latest chapter is my favorite yet! |
 Sharpsnout 2006-05-12 . chapter 14Hey sorry for the delay in reviewing...was getting finals done an' gettin' ready to head back home and havent had time to really get on now I am back!
'nother great chapter...heh two chapters actually, I cant wait to read what happens next...o suspense...
Keep up the fantastic work!
*bows*
Sharpsnout |
 marco1094 2006-05-05 . chapter 13Good fanfic! I liked it how you made the island more weirder than it is. Also how you inserted the City of the Damned. |
 Richard Starkey 2006-05-05 . chapter 13Ga! It's gettin' pshycadelic in here! And that's not a bad thing... (I'm a hippie, lol)
WO! OK, well, update! |
 Richard Starkey 2006-04-26 . chapter 11Coolio. Haha... Charlie the fan nerd?! WOO HO! And Jack... Blah. He was having a... j-ACK moment, as I like to call them! Yay! Update soon? *Jig* |
 Sharpsnout 2006-04-26 . chapter 11Hey welcome back! I hope you had fun in washington even with all the walking Lol...
This was another superb chapter and well worth the wait ok so the wait wasnt that long, but it felt like it was...heh
Anyways I love Charlie's lord of the rings comment, everytime I watch lost I keep expecting him to do something hobbitish you know to keep everyone on their toes...it would be funny, but alas I doubt it'll happen...Hehe
Like I said 'nother fantastic job cant wait till the next update...till then!
*bows*
Sharpsnout |
 October Sky 2006-04-24 . chapter 11Hm..interesting. A very unique story, no doubt about that, which is always nice when it works; and I think this one does. I have to admit though, imo, the transitions from flashback to present are a little confusing, almost like you have too much going on. Imo you also are revealing a little too much at once..but at the same time it works, because you naturally have to keep the pace up. I read straight through this story, curious to know what happened to these boys and who they are. I'm curious to know more about them, and I can't wait to find out as the story progresses. Other things about the story were great as well, like the interactions between Hurley and Charlie(the shoulder thing was hilarious:D)..and the LOTR comment from Charlie was priceless:-p All around, great story! |
 Sharpsnout 2006-04-16 . chapter 10O yay! Updates!
This really is turning into one of the best fics I have read in a long while. And I love the fact you brought Vincent in it...aw...I love labs and loved him, I cant wait to see where you take this whole thing...
Have fun in Washington, I've been there twice and love it! Enjoy yourself and hope to have an update when you return!
*bows*
Sharpsnout |
 Richard Starkey 2006-04-13 . chapter 10Yay! Ari is here! OMG. I loved the Hurley thing. It was SO in character. So very... Hurley.
*Does jig* |
 Sharpsnout 2006-04-10 . chapter 9*claps* bravo bravo
'nother fantastic chapter as all ways!
Keep up the fantastic work!
*bows*
Sharpsnout |
 Richard Starkey 2006-04-08 . chapter 8Aw... the chapter's over so soon? *Does another jig trying to please you enough to update quickly* |
 Sharpsnout 2006-04-06 . chapter 7Yet another suberb chapter,
Locke always creeps me out when he does that..."It's gonna rain," he'd make a killing writing an almanac for the Island...lol
Like I said great job keep up the great work
*bows*
Sharpsnout |
 Richard Starkey 2006-04-05 . chapter 7Good for you. I like it mucho! More soon. Please? |