Hmm, I see. Well, you should update this sometime in the close future man, I want to see what happens, ja ne.

Here's hoping that this story isn't dead, that it's just sleeping.

Not bad, to bad you stopped this fic before it really went any where. While the idea is pretty sound, this fic could use a small rewrite. Basicaly major events are a little forced, huge changes in character with little ot no reason for the change. I am not the OOC police like some reviewers but I still like the time spent to make the changes believable. Ranma in this fic has gone threw some huge changes, which are mostly glossed over as brief after thoughts. I hope you continue this, the fic was just starting to get to the gold digger part, and I was looking forward to his relatinoship with Shelia. It seemed to have a pretty strong base of her being an unusual werecat, something he could relate to.

This the second that I have seen that has Ranma adopting a Werecheeta child.

The first is:Love of a Cheetah
Ryan Slicer

The second is yours.

Each starts with Ranma befriending people of the Werecheeta clan, gaining some controll of his curse, and then excepting the child with the death of the mother.

Then each goes its own way beyond that. I find yours unique in every way and well worth the read. I look forward to seeing where you go from here.

Especally when Ranma makes it to the Diggers and Collonge explains Shampoo's Diplomatic Boo-Boo with the giants. And the required actions to recover their Honor.

Again, thanks for the good read.


may the MUSE be with you!

I'm definitely curious as to where this goes. I suppose another plot whole that I'm not too sure about, is it seems that Ranma may have had the chance to kill his attackers in the earlier fights, but didn't. Given that they were after his family with lethal force, I'm a bit surprised. The current direction looks good thought, although I'm not sure that dragging out the hunt for Ranma and such helps the plot along too much. I confess to also being a bit surprised at Nabiki's apparent disinterest in Ranma romantically... Good luck with this..

It was pretty good so far, although I did read it rather fast. The things that stuck out are you may want to watch continuity a bit closer. There were little things, but perhaps the biggest was it almost seemed jarring the way ranma suddenly was able to cast jusenkyo curses. All in all, I think a revision could really tighten this story up and make it even better. I would definitely get rid of all of the inline author's comments. If something is truly needed it can be written as part of the story. I had thought this was the last chapter written, but I see I have one more that I'll get to later.

Oh, and one minor plot hole. Ranma knows of a universal cure. The moss from the Orochi. While it is not to say that it would definitely work, but it is surprising that he didn't at least consider it.

"Hell now I problem put ff a sent to attract men.”"
huh??

very good

This is a fantastic plot; one that I've never seen before. I can't wait to see what happens next. Also, it is spelled Ryouga Hibiki. Don't forget to update!

Great Chapter!

a cramp in your hand?

that's pretty lame. funny, but lame.

but i guess i'll forgive you, since your first chapter was so much longer.

;)

Wasn't Nodoka's house rebuilt after the failed wedding?
If so they don't need the hotla and BTW Nabiki or Kasumi are very good candidates for Ranma.

dennisud

keep on typing

Great chapter.

Ah that went really well and like fruit juice went smoothly
with the right flavor down my throuth this chapter also read alike. ;)

Please update soon!