I just love this story! Can't get enough of these four guys!
Your really really great and thanks to gerigirl who brought me into this story. I really don't have any luck finding a non yaoi Saiyuki fic with a good plot but she was just so kind as to look up stories for me which aren't quite 'wholesome'...(I'm not imploring that yaoi's harmful, it's just not my thing! XD -peace) And you're a really really good writer. I like your writing style it almost seemed like this is a part of the real story like a lost chapter or the sort of! You kept them in characters and you build up Sable's character quite well too.

I don't know how many times I smiled or almost laughed at myself while reading this (if I'm alone I would be laughing my head off but I needed to be quiet and compose as I don't want my officemates to notice or they might think I have gone crazy- or things like I'm not doing my job- which in truth is yeah, I'm not! hehehe XD) I almost have gotten Sanzo's habit of cursing and threatening as well, -(oohh I might want to stop that! ;3)

Anyway, I really admired your work. I hope you continue to write quality fics like this! It's only very seldom to find a good fic here that's really worth reading! And for my favorite chapters/parts...I like every piece of it!! I like the parts where they were teasing each other no matter if it was Goku or Gojyo or Hakkai or Sanzo I just like it! When they pretended not to care but hell be damned that they really do!! Those things..and the last part where Sanzo was naked??! o_0..oohh I can imagine that! - (o_0 evil-naughty eyes!! -lol)

I absolutely love this! LOL at the thought of Sanzo being reincarnated as a dog. Aw... Anyway, I like what you've done with the characters, so very believable. Kanzeon is her usual infuriating self, I see.

Aw, poor Sanzo. Within a day he had everything in his reach, and now he still has to go though some 50 chapters of manga and 100.0 fanfictions before he gets to the castle again. XD

The Epilogue was fantastic, and did more for an already fantastic story than I could have imagined! I adored it~

I SO called his coming back naked! So called it.


As for the last line...ya...awkward~

That last bit with Sable taking advantage of the mind-switch to avoid Hakkai's driving was hilarious~ The pup may be a pest, but he has Sanzo's good sense of self-preservation. XD

The end to this chapter was palpably awesome in in its power.

The way your wrote HAakkai's recognition was so very delicately and subtly different from Gojyo's. I adored this chapter.

XD He got hit on by a GOD! First a hermaphrodite Goddess, then a cross dressing scorpion, and now a DOG! Way to go Sanzo~

Love...chapter... Oh my goodness! XD I adore this. And I love it that Gojyo figured it out before smarty-pants Hakkai! (Goku's going to be last, isn't he? -__- )

The description of Gojyo laughing and crying all at once was extraordinary.

XD This chapter was hilarious. I loved how Sanzo/Sable got the front seat! And I loved his bark at the others! Gah!

i luv the friendship, the puppy/dog sanzo and the works in this fic.

Thanks for sharing it with us! ^-^

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I can't tell you how much I loved this. For your request, I think my favorite scene was when Hakkai found out Sanzo was Sable. That pulled at my heart strings, it really did. I was bawling like a Valley Girl that lost her favorite Louis Vuitton bag. Honest. The rain realy added to that whole 'Hakkai' mood.
Although I have to say, I loved all the scenes where someone realized Sanzo was the dog. Even Kougaiji, that was super special.
The ending made me smile and grin like a leprechaun, and seriously, this is just--
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I think you especially have a talent for Hakkai and Gojyo. It's nice to see them as friends and roommates without getting any connotation that they're 'in love' or something. Yaoi's okay, but friendship is so much better between these two I think.
But not to say Sanzo and Goku are lacking in any way. Both of them are wonderfully in character throughout, and I too think Sanzo has a special soft side to him. Anyone raised by Koumyou has to have a heart, you know?
In all, you're writing style just has the perfect combination of sass, cleverness and emotion, and I enjoyed reading this story an endless amount. I hope you write more concerning these four fellows, and really, congratulations on a fic well done!
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Wow, I loved this entire story!! That, and I almost died laughing several times.

I loved this so much! Everyone was really in character and sappy moments were dealt with really well too. I especially loved the final climax where Goku admitted the truth and that final line of 'Scratch my back' was awesome.