Will, This is an excelent addition to the first chapter. I am wearing goosebumbs now. I mean, Now I know for sure that you Kill me {Okay, not Will herself in killing me, but the Author...} (For those of you who dont' know what I am talking about, visit the W.I.T.C.H. RPG Forum, and you will see I play Matt, which is why I freaked out in the last review). But wow. and your explanation at the bottom, wow. That was like. Wow. All I can say. Definatly reminds me of, well, Knights of the Old Republic 2 (Star Wars game, But it does remind me of it...). This story rocks my boat. Idk how the hell I am going to go to bed tonight...

What have you done! What the hell are you doing! You, like, killed me will! What is wrong with you! You like, Ugh! GRR! ROAR! How could you do this to me? This is going to be good, but you like, you hurt me. You stopped. You stopped writing, I... I... I am at a loss... How could you just submit one chapter? Your killing me!

dude, um, I like ur story, but...yeah, this is sorta embarrasing...we have the same title. I have a story called Queen of Hearts. could you possibly change it? plz, I sorta thought of it first. I'd really appreciate it. Update

When will see's Harry, can she fall in love with him and not know wether she should take him 2 voldermort and And AND(im getting a bit exited) She killes voldermort, phobos and cornelia!

Ooh, goodie! I like it! Keep it up and have fun! Cya!

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Take care,

Izzy aka ShalBrenfan

pretty good pretty good, it's going to be a good story, but it's rather annoying how right now you'r eskipping around details (not that I expect anymore from you, leaving us in suspense is what you do best). aw well, update soon

Man, another one? You are getting to be one busy writer.

As for this: Yikes! Evil Will? This should be fun.