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Togu
2006-04-09 . chapter 1
love it!! read it 4 times already :D :D

snicker forever! YAY! :D
MrsEads
2006-03-29 . chapter 1
Aw! That was great. I can just picture that - Grandma and Baby Nicky...Good job. Keep writing!
Little Miss Sidle
2006-03-28 . chapter 1
Oh my God, that was great!
undercrisis
2006-03-19 . chapter 1
hey! another alton brown fan! for that reason alone you get loads of hugs from me.

well i kinda hoped that you took off from the kind of humor that alton has, i guess it turned out to have a slightly more serious tone. but i did love the little bits in there, and it wasn't too crazy with the plot falling apart.

anyway, just wanted to tell you i loved it, you made a pretty good and more importantly, a credible story. sorry i'm not much of a reviewer, or it must be my off night.
Isabell89
2006-03-19 . chapter 1
Wow, great story. I loved the POV, I loved the idea, and I loved the perfect ending :)
cowgirl.at.heart
2006-03-14 . chapter 1
that was very cute :D
CSI3Snickers
2006-03-14 . chapter 1
OMG! I love this story! This is awesome and realistic, and descriptive. Which I love so much. I LOVE the last part. Very blunt and funny. More more!
Transgenic-girl
2006-03-14 . chapter 1
This one was hilarious and sweet. Hmm...flour coated Nick.
Sahariah
2006-03-13 . chapter 1
Haha, that was awesome! I loved Nick's indications of where he thought flour would have ended up on her face... yum. :) Great piece; awesome writing as always!
PandorasHollow
2006-03-13 . chapter 1
great story. so adorable. great idea with the family cook book and Nick's baby picture
The Notorious Cat
2006-03-13 . chapter 1
GAH! O the amazingness!

this = great
forensicsfan
2006-03-13 . chapter 1
You have reduced me to apple pie filling with this one...with warm crumbly things.
Cheryl
2006-03-13 . chapter 1
Absolutely wonderful! So very sweet! What a pick-me-up!
nickysbabygirl
2006-03-13 . chapter 1
Aw very nice I loved it.
bauerfreak
2006-03-13 . chapter 1
tee hee. That was awesome. Nick touching her face where he imagined the flour to be was adorable. Great fic!
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