The Two Trees:
I love the diction and flowing figurative language in this, it's almost Shakespearian but also romantic. Beautiful! Nice description about the ravens.

Chapter One:
I like the choice of point of view because it makes the story more interactive. I'm not sure what to say on Yuki's character because I have a different perspective than you but this is your fic so even though it's different from my idea it's still good. Great dynamics once again you seem to capture romance perfectly in your fics. Nice work on both Kyo and Tohru. I loved Yuki's crack about the numbers. Excellent metaphor about fire and now. This chapter also had descriptions that I truly enjoyed.

Chapter Two:
You accidentally put 'what I coward' instead of: 'what a coward'. I love Motoko and you really get her, I hate when people claim that all she is is evil. Such bitter notes Yuki has towards himself *pets stuffed Yuki rat hand rest with tear drop*.

Chapter Three:
Yes! Haru arrives now you've used both of my favorite males and one of my favorite females in this fic ^_^. I think Haru calls Tohru Honda-san like Yuki does but I suppose these small things can be changed. Aww, don't hurt Haru! *gets protective* but I suppose this might be something Yuki feels but on the other hand there's so much that Haru has done for him as well, it would be nice to see from his perspective, which wouldn't fit in with the fic but still. Okay good, it's good that you put that in [this may seem really strange that I write reviews whilst going along ^^;; sorry for that]. T_T I don't think Haru is that mean *gets very protective again*

Chapter Four:
Nice reference to Makoto's image of Yuki, I don't think he got over that as well. 0.0 Kyo in a maid uniform does not register well in my mind *pictures Yuki and Haru instead* now that's better. I like how you keep adding these important people into the fic, many would have left some people out and although there are people you leave out those are the people introduced later making it perfect for the times it's set in. Nice depiction of Ayame, but you could have referenced Yukis childhood a little more, and Yuki seems so mean in this fanfic. Holy Hell Yuki seems so cold and evil *cries* it's sad to see him like this

Chapter Five:
I like this conversation, it seems the sort of discussion the two of them would have. Excellent line: "Limbs made clumsy by fear" I like the portrayal of Akito's power and how simplistic it is.

Reader Note:
I'm reviewing right but I know what you mean, I'm trying to seek out people who will review my work but...that doesn't work anymore, even if I pour myself into a chapter one may not review it, in fact one of my newest fics only has 4 hits and I posted yesterday.
~Myst

Wow. This is an amazing Yuki fic shows how he acts and how he does his masks many roles... and the affect Akito has well done :)

Yuki!
Wow - good job on this one! I love the convo between Yuki and Kyo ( or arguement I should say ).

Yuki's thoughts concerning Akito and his power - well put.
Very sad :(

Congrats!
Onward a'reading I go...

I love that poem! I love Amelia Atwater Rhodes! I love her books! I LOVE this fic =D!

Wow.

That was really different. Bust really great. Just definately not what I was expecting. Very insightful. It's going on my favourites list.

Luv
Lauren

Wonderful, just like all your other stories, it was very well written and I enjoyed reading it. Your a great author. Once again I enjoyed reading it.
Thats all for now.
Cya.

Ech...poor yuki...I wish I could hug him sometimes. I guess Yuki!rat is still cute... Very nicely written.

“Oh, Kyo-kun, don’t be jealous of Tohru-chan! You’re almost as good a cook, and you’d look just as ravishing in a maid’s uniform –” At this point Shigure realizes he has passed the danger zone and jumps for his office, slamming the door just in time.

That part was funny! That's just like Shigure! You did great on this ficcie too. =]

Keep on writing~

~Leeann

The way you capture all of the sides of these people just astounds me! They're all so complexed, and you seem to be able to describe them without focusing to much on one area!

I love Yuki to pieces, and he's so so so so fun to read about! The poor kid deserves way more cuddlage and lovage than he gets...though he probably wouldn't want it...i'm rambling :)

In all your fics I love the way you describe Ayame's and Yuki's relationship the most! I love watching those two interract, and watching it ffrom the inside of Yuki's head is even better. Kudos!

TTFN

Katia-chan

Since Yuki is my favorite character, I just had to add this to my favorites. My, my, Yuki is a very cynical child, that much is true, however his thoughts were just so tragic, so hopeless, it didn't seem like he had a single hope or prayer to be loved unconditionally. Still, I enjoyed it a lot!

I like it. It smacks of my work in the prespectives, but, hey, why let a good idea go to waste? He thinks of everyone in a different way...and analyzes how they think of him. Festive.

Oh...and the poem really, REALLY, really goes with the fic. Nice choice...me likey ^.^

that was really good

Oh I love this story too! I hope there's another chapter

Interesting take on Yuki's proverbial turmoil, and sicne he's my favourite character, I found this piece much too short! I did find the way Yuki's thoughts abit confusing, mostly when he was addressing others.
What really got to me were his thoughts in regards to Haru are tragic, and I think if Haru knew of them he'd be horrified. It doesnt look like theres hope for even a platonic relationship there. So sad.