|Reviews for Path of Twinkling Dusk|
| riverrat 1/29/13 . chapter 49
Well, I finished it even though the last part of this great heartfelt and emotional trilogy was reduced to summarization without any heart and soul. It is a shame if you are leaving it like that. I’m sure I won’t be the only one disappointed.
| riverrat 1/17/13 . chapter 35
Poor Severus. Even though he has his students to worry about he has really nobody he can pour his heart out. In all of his loneliness he has fallen prey to the mirror of arised.
| riverrat 1/6/13 . chapter 21
I really love Tonks in your fic. As a matter of fact I like the way you mention all the other characters we know from the book and the way you make them fit into your timeline.
| riverrat 1/2/13 . chapter 3
Looks like Sev has his work cut out for him to straighten up those little monsters...lol
| JaneDoh0 10/6/12 . chapter 49
I just wanted to say that I loved your epic unfinished trilogy, and that I hope your non-fanfic writing is going well. Thanks for sharing your writing with us!
| Fang 4/20/12 . chapter 49
Please! Please! Please! Finish this story! It's too good to end this way!
| iwantmycupcake 2/2/11 . chapter 49
My favorite character has always been Severus Snape. I LOVE HIM. And Draco. And all the other Slytherins. :)
I read the other parts to the trilogy and I simply loved how we got to know Sev, and all the troubles he went through and how he was slowly recovering. It was amazing to see how he grew up and all his feelings. It was really sweet and emotional. I couldn't stop reading. Whenever I had free time, I would rush to the computer and start reading your fanfiction. I wish you kept up with the original format with everything from Snape's POV though. When you split it up in the end into Year 2, Year 3, etc., it was just a basic overview/summary of what was happening except I felt that we weren't as close to Snape as before. I understand with all the characters that it would be easier and it would possibly get boring year after year with Snape preparing for the classes, getting ready, blahblahblah:) but I was kind of disappointed when Gorgon died because I thought it would be more...emotional, I guess? and I was like, WTF MALFOY? I loved all the Slytherins :) They deserve to be seen in a better light. I loved meeting the new characters like Carling and Leland your bum outside! Screw Pansy! But, I absolutely loved how it made the and it was great to see them so proud of themselves, especially with Tonks. It was amazing! And the whole time, I was hoping you bring back Tabitha somewhere near the end maybe to visit Snape and tell him that she was in rehab or something haha.
I really hoped you would keep on writing and finish the story :)
All in all, breathtaking fanfiction. The best Snape fanfic I have ever read. Great job :)
| waiting for eternity 11/11/10 . chapter 49
Having stayed with the tilogy for so long, I can't help but say that I'm disappointed in how this story is reduced to summaries. I miss the weeks when everything was detailed and Severus came to life. While I understand that years have passed and things have changed, I still wish they were the same. I won't be reading this any more, perhaps only reviewing the first two, but good luck with whatever you are doing. I hope you like it.
| NoxSomnium 9/12/10 . chapter 47
It's so sad! Sniff.
| NoxSomnium 2/16/10 . chapter 49
Cutting year four into pieces made it much easier to read. I want to know what happens still! Don't forget (which is not to say that I don't realize you're busy etc... I'm just saying) :)
| YuriyTalaIvanov 1/23/10 . chapter 49
will you please please please please please update this again? i hope it hasn't been fully abandoned or anthing...i love this fic so much and it's nice to read a accurate version of what happens in the books from a slyth. POV. i do feel harry and the golden trio gets away with too many things...*sighs* i would like to read the full chapters of everything but informative summaries will do too! haha they're like a mini story in itself! please finish this!
| Weavers 12/22/09 . chapter 49
Really been enjoying your series. the past few chapters have been a bit dissapointing. They just sound like a recitation of the books from a slytherin point of view and less a story/interaction :(
nethertheless, I'll keep the story on alert. i'm sure you're just summarising it all to get to the main parts...
don't be afraid to tweak/change things. we don't need a completely accurate recitation of the books
| Sean Mulligan 11/20/09 . chapter 49
I love your fic. I hope that you update it soon. I couldn't find your Snape miniessays on your website.
| Sean Mulligan 11/20/09 . chapter 48
Why is Pansy so angry with Granger? She wasn't in competition with her for Krum. I also don't see how Harry being forced into the tournament counts as special treatment? They were only following the established rules of the tournament and weren't trying to do Harry a favor. The judges would have made the same ruling no matter whose name had come out of the goblet.
| Sean Mulligan 11/20/09 . chapter 46
Why did Dumbledore say that it was natural to think that Sirius had been a traitor? Sirius and James were like brothers? I had assumed that Hagrids lessons were as safe as any his predecessor had and having Magical Creature lessons about Hippofriffs was no big deal and that Draco's injuries were not a result of any negligence on Hagrid's part. Why are the Slytherins so upset about Harry having a new broom? The previous year, the Slytherins all had 2001's while Harry only had a 20. Is their a rule that all the members of a team had to ride the same type of broom? I remember that the Weasley's had cleansweeps even though Harry had a Nimbus 20. Besides, Harry's previous broom had just been destroyed so I don't see how letting Harry have a Firebolt would be considered special treatment.