|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| DKM 2008-07-25 ch 15, | abuseOMG! What an amazing story! I had to read it from start to finish and just LOVED it! The suspense, the intrigue, the all around feeling of "WHAT THE HELL IS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT?!" I couldn't just sit here and NOT write a review. That would be so mean! So, here I am, waiting to go home after a long day at work, enjoying a little fan fiction while I do so, and needing to voice my opinion. A job well done! The tension and suspense was well written and kept me clicking the next button so I could read another chapter. And although the ending surprised me a bit because I'm a fluff monster and I was hoping to get an admission of love, or at least a kiss, LOL. But you played this VERY well and very in character for the two of them, so I commend you for not giving in to the fluffy bunnies and staying true to Bones. Awesome job! Oh, you're probably gonna kick my ** for this next part, but consider me anal as well as OCD... There were a few inconsistencies I noticed in the plotline, but nothing that can't be fixed with a little editing. Nothing major, just some minor details. I won't even mention them here because I'm not THAT mean. Feel free to PM me, tho, if you wanna know. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story! Can't wait to read what you write next! -DK |
| Anne S. 2008-05-27 ch 15, anon. | abuseExcellent story. Well-paced, great suspense, and extremely well-written. Thanks for the entertainment! |
| missysillivan 2008-04-29 ch 15, | abusei loved it! |
| Number1GSRCSIfan 2008-03-18 ch 15, | abuseoh my god! the suspence! please please please please update or do a sequel! umm not got much ideas but maybe angela or hodgnins or cullen should tell booth like we all know u love her, u know it but she dosent and angela tells breenen the same nso tehn they get together =D |
| WriterC. 2007-10-19 ch 15, | abuseAw that was great. You know, you kept me up until 1am and I have to be up and about for gymnastics early tomorrow! Yet this was worth it. A sequel would be much appreciated, indeed! |
| canadianagurl 2007-09-03 ch 15, | abusemaybe you can write a sequel about Bren's hopsital stay on on her way to recovery when all of a sudden another atack is made--or something..i dunno but htis ending seems so mysterious! |
| Froggerz 2007-08-30 ch 15, | abuseOh I should never have some what grown up and got a real job. Got no sneak previews or even the heads up that there was a new post. *crys* Plus its only 15 chapters long Usaully its double. Any ways I like this ending so much more than the evil soap opera ideas my brain came up with so long ago. And no worries I have a ideas coming for you. PST I have some week days off coming up soon be prepared. HA HA HA OH BTW Booth with the rugged 5 oclock shawdow is always a plus. |
| saturn567 2007-08-30 ch 15, | abusehow about Booth helping her get on with life after that event? anyway this was a great read! |
| 18lzytwner 2007-08-30 ch 15, | abuseVery good. :) Glad to see that Brennan is safe and she and Booth are a little closer. I hope you do continue it. Delve into what happens after Bones gets out of the hospital. :) |
| Mahine 2007-08-30 ch 15, | abuseYay an Update!! BOO, it's the end!! You HAVE to carry on with this fic, I think it has quite alot of scope. You could have Brennen going on some weird emotional, I can't be left alone type of thing! All I know is that you need to write a sequal to this! |
| jedlee07 2007-08-29 ch 15, | abuseOh man! I totally think you should do a sequel, kind of picking up where you left off, maybe with some time in between. I absolutely loved the emotions that you could JUST tell where there in this last chapter. I definitely think you should continue with it. but that's just my opinion. ~jed |
| beaglelvr93 2007-08-29 ch 15, | abuseLoved it! Sad tho, I think you should write one about her recovery and BB fluffiness. Booth can help her recover both emotinally and phisically. MORE MORE MORE! Beagle |
| della 2007-08-29 ch 15, anon. | abuseok, nice ending, not too slushy and in character. Can I just say one thing?? SEQUAL please? |
| Danielle 2007-07-12 ch 14, anon. | abusePlease update this story. It is really, really good!! |
| laced-with-fire 2007-06-27 ch 14, | abusepoor Booth |