Supposed to have been posted 17 September 2011, at and the Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents. but I had problems with my computer, and flaked on attaching these reviews to the original story threads for the last year. Everyone say; 'Mach is a flake, Mach is a yo-yo'. Better yet (Waves hand) 'Mach is trying, but he's still a flake'.

KOTOR, so specific period given: There are things the new Revan refuses to forget

The piece is too short to really get a handle on. It reads as a prologue.

This looks like a realy good start to a great story! I liked the how you ended your intro with a shock! In the begining of this story on your disclaimer you mentioned KOTOR 2 are the charecters from that game going to be in here to? Update soon!