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Reviews For: Pain

narutodippy
2007-10-21
ch 1,
abuseWow, this story was very good, well written, if not short, but I guess that's what you cll a one shot. I wish to see what other material you poses.

Looking forward to more of your work

-ND
LovelyCookie
2006-11-19
ch 1,
abuseThat wasn't so angsty, It actually had a happy ending! Congrats on the idea of having them as a threesome! ^_^
Shadow Kitsune67
2006-03-13
ch 1,
abusewhoa...so...it's a threesome kind of thing...nice...=o. quite interesting really. x) Hope there was more of this fandom though. =) I mean. NaruHina can get a bit repetative. Adding Neji in there and including him in made it more interesting. x)
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