 aiRo25 2009-05-25 . chapter 1This is so, so good. I just wish it could go on for a few more chapters, that Rogue could KNOW. Love this. You're awesome. |
 Winddrifter 2009-01-27 . chapter 1Very sweet, any chance you'll change your mind and not make this a one shot? |
 Jessie07 2008-01-10 . chapter 1great story! Keep up the great work! |
 JustJulyy 2008-01-08 . chapter 1I almost lost all hope until I read this story. Very nice
-J |
 FanFictionFanatic 2007-02-02 . chapter 1 Exquisitely written but in my opinion, the ending seems unfinished...even abrupt. |
 Lady Farevay 2006-04-16 . chapter 1That was quite... different. It had a foreboding sense to it.
I'm not sure if I'm afraid or interested *Laughs* Well done though, you've certainly got me thinking.
Lady F |
 darkstorm5000 2006-03-19 . chapter 1Nice fic. This was an interesting look into Remy's head as an at first reluctant, but now very fascinated peeping-tom(Fascinated about Rogue that is). Anyways, good job! |
 Grin Reaper 2006-03-18 . chapter 1The story is...serene. Damn you're good... |
 MidniteAngelGoth 2006-03-15 . chapter 1wow. that was breath taking. truly insightful. i've never thought of it that way. don't make it a one-shot, it's way too cool to be one-shot-like. please?? twas grand, methinks |
 Rogue14 2006-03-14 . chapter 1I found the one-shot quite adorable ^_^ Maybe because I love stalker Remy, lol. |
 Green Amber 2006-03-14 . chapter 1Ah, Stalker Remy. Who is both creepy and sweet at the same time. How do you do it? You've managed to show that this situation is a scary situation for both parties involved. Remy, because he doesn't know why he's doing this, and Rogue, who if she did find out what Remy was doing would be scared. And yet, you also manage to show that Remy really does care for Rogue, and that he worries about her, seeing as he ignored his instints in order to make sure that she was safe.
Continue writting, Percy. You have a lot of talent, and I really want to see you continue to develop your writing style. |
 musagirl15 2006-03-14 . chapter 1Nice story, too bad it's a oneshot. |
 Black-Rose23 2006-03-14 . chapter 1A very good, angsty story. Poor Rogue and poor Remy |
 Roguechere 2006-03-14 . chapter 1If there was a best summary award somewhere - you should definetly get it!
It is creepy. We as people find the oddest of things romantic - until we experience them for themselves. Being stalked is NOT cool. LOL.
But in our world of fanfiction we feel safe - and I admit I enjoy it from time to time.
Anyways, enough about that! On to the story...
It was wonderful. I absolutely loved it and it felt so original! Good for you. Taking on the task of doing something different and portraying a character in a way that all might not agree with is hard.
I did notice some mistakes though. Wrong words, not pluralizing and especially this line:
'He’s never close enough to make out titles, but it’s apparent that she likes her books like her the sleeves of her shirts-long.'
I think I got what you were trying to say but if you read it - it doesn't make sense.
But applause all around. This has gone on my favorites list :)
Keep up the amazing work,
~Roguechere. |
 ishandahalf 2006-03-14 . chapter 1ooh! great stuff, i really enjoyed this. yes, there is a rather fine line between observing and stalking, but i don't think remy's purposes were particularly sinister here. in fact, he was pretty damn sweet, just watching her and happy she's able to find some peace when she sleeps... i think it's the fangirl bias - usually something like this WOULD be kinda creepy with anybody else, but if remy does it we all swoon. ;)
anyhoo. yes, the point is, lovely! gold stars for you. |