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| Kira Kei Jinx 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. I loved that version. Especially the last line. No wonder you got an A. |
| Queen Datsuh 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseThis fic was amazing. You took an alternate theory and delivered it masterfully. Excellent Job. |
| Mollyscribbles 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abuseWell written, and nicely creepy. One nitpick -- the box was intended to hold Snow's heart, and while this option avoids the ambiguity of the sow's heart, it's not really big enough to hold a human head. . . ah, well. Still very good. |
| grumpygrim 2006-03-14 ch 1, | abuseYAY! I love gore :) Awesome story :p |