Wow! I was really hooked. Excellent job and wording.

This story is surprisingly good! Keep It up and PLZ update soon... I want to know what goes on next...

wow this story kicks **. i am a big doa and ninja gaiden fan. good luck with the rest opf this story.

KnightX

What I want to know is why a ninja clan would randomly save a nobody girl from the middle of nowhere and accept her into their clan!

Hopefully this isn't going to be Kahana/Hayate or Hayabusa. I hope Ayane does something about her.

Not bad grammer though. Continue.

trust me, she's very obnoxious

i swear i've read this story somewhere maybe

things are starting to build up, hope to see another chap soon. hope you change the speachmarks to " though, the single ones are usually used for thoughts in most fics so its a bit confusing

Interesting start, will she be trained by rya, hayate and ayane? would love to read more!