oh. Hot. *giggles* I LOVED it. I like Usopp and he and Kaya would be adorable...but I think Kaya and Kuro/Klahadore is hotter...*snerks* Very nice. XD He is such a pedo...*snickers*

Aww, that was so sweet. I like the pairing of Kaya and Captain Kuro. :)

That was weird:o
But inrtesting(sp?):)

:D
You are right.
There is so little of this pair.
God I wish I had an idea to write about for them...
I really wanna go to bed, but it's like 8 in the morning and i just pulled an allnighter.
XD
Sorry, random rant.
GREAT!

I loved it! Kuro/Kaya are so awesome for each other.
Please Update soon.

Hello i'm the Red Barron.That is the greatest paring in the world.It's even better than Jack/Kimiko.I also want to know how do you get in here without Email.

Seeing as you reviewed my fanfic, "Letters", here's my opinion of yours:

You are an excellent writer, and I am eternally glad that SOMEONE out there (other than myself) approves of pairing Kuro with Kaya. Your writing style is excellent, and seems to flow with an elegant flair to it. I'm deeply impressed, and those that know me know that doesn't happen often. I'm putting you on Author Alert List for your refrence, and I just want to finish by saying you've done a great job, and I hope to see more Kuro/Kaya wonderfulness out of you in the future.

JKS

*Geez, is wonderfulness even a word. *smacks self*

The first chapter was great. I'm compelled to write a new fanfic. coz of you. It was very easy to put in mind and the usage of words was very suited for readers.
BTW: Is Khaladore Kuro's family name?

oh my garsh. i almost left your real name on this. my almost bad. really, i have no idea what's going on in this story, mainly since, i really just don't know. i like all the detail and i think you're a good writer. really i do. i might get a story on here soon. i didn't know you had to upload it though. major points taken from fanfic for that one. this is all just so complicated. but...this is about you. nice story. very cool. remember, some people are stupid. don't believe stupid people.

AH! Omg I wrote a fic that took place in this EXACT spot in the manga. Of course mine was terrible smut, and will likely never be posted anywhere XD

Continue please?

YAY! So cute! ^__^

Actually, despite being in love with UsoppxKaya, I do not hate the story. The pairing I can see as a butler/mistress, but I really don't see it in a love relationship way...

Anyways, the story! *shom!*

The writing is decent. A few things, kinda towards the end, were a little too poetic compared to the beginning, and I keep wondering why Klahadore still wants to kill her to fufill his plan. I guess, since it's a oneshot, that you won't elaborate on it, and therefore, it'd be even better if you put a little thought of it in here.

Hopefully that'll help! I hope you continue writing as well or better than this! =)