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silver-eyed
2006-11-28 . chapter 13
hahaha, this is nice; a good down to earth duo who takes comfort in the material things like clothes. i like the way you wrote it and no, duo didn't offend me. also, i like how you're slowly but surely bringing them a little closer each time. keep it up!
Vitanie Tora
2006-11-27 . chapter 13
For some reason I have nothing to say. Except that I can totally picture Duo doing something like that. Well I'm out for now so until later
Tora-chan
mika-chan
2006-10-07 . chapter 12
KAKUI! I want the next 1! Hurry up! Uwah! I wanna know whats gonna happen next! OREWA NO HEERO! HERO!
Kami-Crimson
2006-10-05 . chapter 12
Poor Duo. He just wants to crawl away and die. I would too. See you next update. TOODLES!
cardinal
2006-10-05 . chapter 12
You know this is really good. Maybe because it was so unexpected. Usually when Heero gets killed off so Relena can get the "other" man it is just boring. Going back to the death and the motivations for the suicide was brilliant and horribly sad. The scene with the prayer and the comments about faith were touching and filled with life. Where you are going with this is a complete mystery. That's good. Thanks!
Vitanie Tora
2006-10-04 . chapter 12
Oh please, you know that Duo going to want to kiss her again and probably wont stop. He's to spontanous to think things through. Well good chapter. Well I'm beat so it's off to bed for me. Until later
Tora-chan
Vitanie Tora
2006-09-18 . chapter 11
Let me say this - - WOW! Get story so far, it's amazing. It flows so well and now I'm hooked. I must say though that I never pictured Duo and Relena. That is one pairing that I never imagined. Well I need to jet off now, so until later
Tora-chan
Kami-Crimson
2006-09-15 . chapter 11
Oh, the drama kicks in! Crappy, I hate it when I get stuck in situations like that. Great chapter, see you next update! TOODLES!
silver-eyed
2006-08-12 . chapter 10
wow, i love it when i discover stories like this! great story so keep it up!
Kami-Crimson
2006-08-12 . chapter 10
HAHA! I loved this chapter! It was perfectly written, and oh so funny. Your update took forever, but I do understand that life gets in the way of things. It never ceases to amaze me just how in character you keep everyone. Duo and Wufei were so perfect. I love them both, but I especially love tem together. I will talk to you at your next update!
Heaven Star
2006-06-14 . chapter 9
DUDE! That chapter rocked!! (still having a hard time dealing with Quatre smoking though! It made me giggle) More! More! It was short but it promised fun stuff ahead, I really want to see where you go with this!^^
Mila
2006-06-09 . chapter 8
i know this is weird but i forgot to say say thanks in the last letter. thanks for thowing me a shout out that made my day oh and i forgive you i know life can get complicated oh and happy b day
Mila
mila
2006-06-09 . chapter 9
Last time I said more people would catch up but it seems it hasnt. Either way your doing great. Hey that rhymes.Anyway keep writing.i really like your wufei chapter i think your got his character down
oh and plz do tell what will happe
sending lots of love your you
Mila
Kami-Crimson
2006-06-09 . chapter 9
I love this story. I love it more every update actually. I grew my hair that long about a year ago, but then my mom made me cut it. You'd think as old as I am I'd be able to wear my hair how i want it, but no, apparently it wasn't up with the current style, and it made her look bad or something, I miss it. But now, it's almost back to how it was, thankfully, my hair grows very quickly, and I'm so glad it was. And I used to braid it everyday too, and I hadn't even watched the show. Actually I have a really strange resemblance to Duo, it's kind of freaky. But my hair is really dark, so it's not quite identical. And I used to have an almost purplish blue color eyes, but now they are kinda of a rusty/reddish/brownish, with flecks of green and black. I'm so weird. I swear, I don't think I'll ever be normal. And now I want a cigarette. And I think I am rambling again. I told you not to get me started. Now I've told about my hair and my eyes and that I smoke and I don't even know what else. I seriously say more in these reviews than I say all day long. And I have to talk to customers at work. Poor Wufei, he didn't have a reason to live anymore. And poor Duo, everyone thinks he's stupid. I really don't think he is though, I mean, people underestimate me all the time, and most think I'm just plain dumb, but actually I have a genius IQ and just don't want ppl to know. See, I figure if ppl think you're stupid, the expect less of you. So you aren't constantly tutoring or something. I know it's a lazy attitude, but I get impatient. And I get Duo too, he pretends to be brainless, it's his mask. Mine is just that I don't correct ppl when they call me dumb. He actually acts out the stupid part. OH,and I want to go shopping! I don't like to shop, but I need some new books. I've read all mine. I wish I could go with you. But the odds of us living in the same area, are, well, almost none. But it'd be cool if we did. I don't even know where you are from...Where is that again, did I ever ask, I don't think so, I usually remember that kind of thing. Ehh...About the story, cuz this is supposed to be a review, I like it. No criticism really, lots of praise though. You know my usual. I'll be waiting for your next update.
Heaven Star
2006-06-08 . chapter 8
Doulbe yay! WuFei chappie and a plot twist! Also, sorry I didn't comment on your comments in the previous review - I was too busy trying to get to the next chapter and catch up :p I didn't mean it as a *bad* thing! I thought it was a great format to have in a fic! I really like it, mainly because it's different, but it suits as well! Totally not knocking the format at all!^^
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