 TOWTWUKER 1/22/06 . chapter 7 PLEASE UPDATE SOON REALLY GOOD! |
 blacksyth 8/20/05 . chapter 7I love the plot... Its a little confusing but i sorta get it.. Plz update |
 jessabelle 5/16/02 . chapter 7 great story! a little confusing, but good. I love ff7/8 crossovers! Keep up the good work, and pwease write more! D
Jess |
 Vick330 1/7/02 . chapter 6OK, don't hate for pointing this out but someone who has been alone for 20 years forgets how to speak. Now that we're over my annoying bit of meddling, I have to say that the story is quite interesting. It is realistic for someone as bottled-up as Squall to act in such a drastic manner. The way the flashbacks make the tale progress is very well done. Furthermore, it is well-written and the characters' relationships & situations nicely depicted. In short, an enjoyable fic with unexpected turns of events. Keep it up. |
 Chris Hulme 7/14/01 . chapter 6 When is this story going to be finished. It's been two months already and it still hasn't been updated. Please write more! I need more! |
 Jer 7/7/01 . chapter 5 Um...it's me again, I just wanted to know if you are going to finish this fanfic, its a very good fanfic and yet you dont write anymore chapters. Its killing me please continue this story. |
 alreadyinuse 6/24/01 . chapter 6I really do like this story. Please say there is more? ) |
 alreadyinuse 6/24/01 . chapter 4So far pretty good. (I'm on chapter 4) It's quite confusing at times, but it's a good story idea. A *tiny* bit of critisim though (meant to help, not hurt) the scene with everyone in Selphie's office could be a bit more believable. And this isn't your fault, but Aeris and Selphie really don't look alike IMO. ) |
 FAAng 6/16/01 . chapter 6 So far, I think it's AWESOME. An extremely involving story, and excellent use of the characters personalities. I was disappointed by the fact that there are only six chapters. I was reading and when in stopped at Chapter 6 I was annoyed because it I was right into it then it finished, no to be continued or "to be updated shortly". Is this where It's going to stay or will it be finished? I sincerely hope the latter. |
 c 6/10/01 . chapter 1 c |
 Cra5hovride 6/6/01 . chapter 6THIS IS SOME SICK AND TWISTED REALITY I LIKE THIS STORY LOADFS, HOWEVER I HATE SQUALLS CHANGE OF CHARACTER IN THE SENSE THAT HE LEFT FOR 20 YEARS, I THINK THATS A BIT MUCH DONT YOU. ANYHOW YOU HAVE SERIOUSLY DONE AN EXCELLENT SOTRY AND ID LOVE TO READ THE REST PLEASE DO WRITE MORE AND FAST. CAUSE I CANT WAIT FOR MORE. PLEASE LET RINOA AND SQUALL BE BACK TOGETHER, AND LET THE ORIGNAL CRUE HAVE THEIR STRENGTH BACK, AS IM A SENTIMENTAL FOOL WHO LOVES TO SEE AN ACTION STORY COME TOGETHER IN A WAY. SO PLEASE LET THEIR BE A MASSIVE FIGHT WHEREBY EVERYONE HAS THEIR STRENGTH BACK WITH LIONHEART SAVING THE DAY LOL. ! |
 Spacemodbunny 6/4/01 . chapter 6I loved it! It was so real and so...pure. I could actually imagine all of this happening if Squall were to leave. I love this story and the flashbacks really helped the quality of the story, KEEP WRITING I WANT TO SEE THE FINISHED PRODUCT! |
 Lone Swordsman 5/28/01 . chapter 6Great characterization! MORE! MORE! MORE! adding this to my favorites! |
 Jer 5/27/01 . chapter 6 This is the a really good story and i never read crossovers that much but i really enjoyed this one, hurry up and finish the story. |
 Tears of Stardust 5/17/01 . chapter 6This story is pretty good right now, and it has a plot brewing in the present as well, which I didn't expect from a story like this. Get out the next chapter soon! |