I loved this, it was so sweet :D

Awwwh. Adorable. Loved it.

Wow! Steamy, hahaha. But not crude. It was deliberate and lovely-a love in it, and I really liked it. So cute! You did it so well, too. The silent building up of the story and what not, and it wasn't fast or annoyingly cliche. I'm rather impressed. Good job!

Miko

Very cute little is probably how they really would act around each other too. Thank you for writing this.

I think they would be exactly as you described if they where married. But their kids would be hell. Pure hell.

OHohohohohoho! my my my isn't mugen a sweet heart...not! lol, i think this is adorable!

lol!

funny, and hot!

love it!

its been 2 years since u wrote this!

you keep them on character even being married! nice :)

I loved it _

The relaxed feel of this piece, Fuu's irritation interspersed with bits of Mugen being himself and irritating her, interspersed with little sexy bits, well...all of that just makes this one-shot. A one-shot is an art, and you have it down, if I do say so myself.

Very hot. Faved!

I thought it was great.

and how long you said you made this.

this was really good!

Gosh... this is one of the best fics I have read.

It is perfect in every sense of the word. The characters are just wonderfully adapted to this situation - their 'almost' conflicting personalities is still evident in the way they argue for the sheets, but they are just perfectly suited for each others it is just... -sigh- wonderful.

PLEASE WRITE MORE FuuGen fics!

oh! I love it! great story

oh my God! i loved this! it was very adorable and your writing is lovely! absolutely lovely!

lols nice ) how cute! they got married! yay! good luckies with your future stories! )