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Mistical Kat
2009-10-28 . chapter 1
Very cute little one-shot.This is probably how they really would act around each other too. Thank you for writing this.
marora
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
I think they would be exactly as you described if they where married. But their kids would be hell. Pure hell.
Otaku's Moon
2008-11-29 . chapter 1
OHohohohohoho! my my my isn't mugen a sweet heart...not! lol, i think this is adorable!
CherryBlossom006
2008-08-22 . chapter 1
lol!
funny, and hot!
love it!
its been 2 years since u wrote this!
you keep them on character even being married! nice :)
mende5525
2008-06-19 . chapter 1
I loved it ^_^
Pen Against Sword
2008-06-11 . chapter 1
The relaxed feel of this piece, Fuu's irritation interspersed with bits of Mugen being himself and irritating her, interspersed with little sexy bits, well...all of that just makes this one-shot. A one-shot is an art, and you have it down, if I do say so myself.

Very hot. Faved!
Alexithimia
2008-06-02 . chapter 1
I thought it was great.
bambichic
2008-02-11 . chapter 1
and how long you said you made this.
this was really good!
The Mock Turtles
2007-12-25 . chapter 1
Gosh... this is one of the best fics I have read.
It is perfect in every sense of the word. The characters are just wonderfully adapted to this situation - their 'almost' conflicting personalities is still evident in the way they argue for the sheets, but they are just perfectly suited for each others it is just... -sigh- wonderful.

PLEASE WRITE MORE FuuGen fics!
cherryblossom94
2007-11-18 . chapter 1
oh! I love it! great story^^
courtXjester
2007-11-05 . chapter 1
oh my God! i loved this! it was very adorable and your writing is lovely! absolutely lovely!
woofyy
2007-09-29 . chapter 1
lols nice =) how cute! they got married! yay!! good luckies with your future stories!! =)
Laney
2007-09-20 . chapter 1
Wow, I'm impressed! The story line is great and your writing also!!
Dark Hope Assassin
2007-09-16 . chapter 1
Tee hee, I very much loved the way that Mugen didn't compromise his decision not to let Fuu have any of the covers and yet didn't let her freeze to death in her own bed. xD Marvelously written piece--quite captivating.
Nandinha Shinomori
2007-08-07 . chapter 1
Very, very, very lovely.

I could perfectly picture the two of them and feel the warmth on Mugen's gaze.

Great job.
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