Very nicely done! I like your transitions from your words, to Austen's, to the '05 movie. A lot of people didn't like the ending scene because it wasn't in the book, but I liked it because it added extra adorable fluff. You're fic added even more adorable fluff to the scene [in a very well written way], so of course it's going to be good!

P.S.

wow, lovely, really lovely


HawkAngel

I really like what you did with this. The end scene of the movie, while very lovely, seemed a bit out of place to me. It felt like the screen writer trying to force some more romance into the movie. I like your perspective of it, and the way you brought them to that scene.

Such a beautiful story. Great writing. Good job and I can't wait to see what else you've written.

Gorgeous and the most wonderful romance, your descriptions were delightful.

I found the ending where they sit near the pond quite... strange really. This fanfic makes me appreciate it even more :)

Finally: a way to explain all those kisses without having to resort to the Singing In The Rain "I love you I love you I love you" moment.

This is cute, and it made me smile. It's also in character for the movie as well as the book (to the extent that it's possible) and plausible.

In other words, great. Thank you.
Denni

Oh my lord. This just made my day. You wrote this absolutely perfectly -- simply stunning, really. Excellent work.

Great twist on the ending of the movie! i enjoyed reading it immensely.

This was absolutely delightful! I love how you melded the scenes so well. Your language is beautiful - the dialogue witty and interesting - wonderful!

oh it was so beautiful! i loved your story!

write more like this!

Aw! I loved the ending of the movie, even though it was a bit disconnected and extremely cheesy. Oh well. Actually, the first time I saw it, I was like 'Why the heck isn't Darcy wearing pants??!', but then I realized they were beige-coloured shorts or something. Man, that was a shock though.

I digress. I meant to say that this story was wonderful - now that ending made more sense. Well done, and it's going on my faves!

Breathtaking. Made better by the fact that D and E are so 'in-character' imo. I really enjoyed it and have added this to my favorite stories so I can read it again...and again...

I absolutely loved your story! Super duper romantic- I liked how you worked in both the quotes from the books and the end scene from the movie! Also, swans happen to be my favorite bird, since I am crazy about the Swan Lake ballet!

Lovely fic! Definitely going into my faves