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| Grand Puba of All The Smurf... 2008-02-05 ch 2, | abuseOH MY DAMN! What happened, you heartless bastard? |
| hawaiingrl08 2007-05-14 ch 2, | abusehey you should like keep going i want to no what happens next. |
| sarah 2007-02-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseThat was so good! UPDATE VERY SOON you can't just end it like that. Pleazz! |
| GregsLabrat 2006-11-24 ch 2, | abuseWhoa! Update soon! |
| crzygrl 2006-09-03 ch 2, | abusehey i liked the story it was awsome but i hope they make it out ok and that the cops get to them on time...ne way i liked the story. |
| Sahariah 2006-04-19 ch 2, | abuseYou killed SARA!? In the SECOND chapter?!?! I can't believe it! She can't be dead. This is a pretty intense story. Please update soon! I'm dying here- no pun intended :P Sahariah |
| gsr4ever323 2006-04-18 ch 2, | abuseThe Song Be My Escape By Relient K Reminds Me Of Your Story This Is A Good Story So Sad :( But Good |
| MrsEads 2006-03-27 ch 2, | abuseNONONO! SHE CAN'T DIE! Update soon, PLEASE! (But, on the plus side, this is REALLY well-written) |
| CSigurlie07 2006-03-23 ch 2, | abusebut, but... Wha?! What the heck was that? You trying to give me a heart attack? How could you kill off Sara? You're gonna resuscitate her, right? |
| knadineg 2006-03-23 ch 2, | abuseI've reviewed :D. So what happens next? |
| Dybdahl 2006-03-23 ch 2, | abuseyou are cruel. poor greg, you really are trying to make a mental case out of him. |
| marya 2006-03-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseplease tell me english is your second language. third? fourth? or just promise me you won't ever write again - that would be a present to us all :) |
| asdjkfdaskjfajk!!! 2006-03-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseIt's SARA, not SARAH. It's a HAMMER, not a HAMMAR. It's HASTILY, not HASTELY. It's LAID, not LAYED. Also, the plot blowed rabbit chunks. The end. |
| oh my god. 2006-03-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh great day. Um, first? Spell check. Please, for the love of god, spell check. Then there's the fact that I really am not sure what is going on in this story. Aside from the fact that you wanted to put Sara & Greg in danger so they could later get it on. There are *so* many other ways to accomplish that. The thing about making Greg be molested? Came out of nowhere. Made no sense. I just. I can't review anymore. YOUR STORY BROKE MY BRAIN. |
| ObessedTWFan 2006-03-22 ch 2, | abuseShe's Dead?! That cant be right, many live through gunshots to teh stomach, which I know she DOES. Awesome Job, had be sitting on teh edge of seat. |