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Grand Puba of All The Smurf...
2008-02-05
ch 2,
abuseOH MY DAMN! What happened, you heartless bastard?
hawaiingrl08
2007-05-14
ch 2,
abusehey you should like keep going i want to no what happens next.
sarah
2007-02-05
ch 2, anon.
abuseThat was so good! UPDATE VERY SOON you can't just end it like that. Pleazz!
GregsLabrat
2006-11-24
ch 2,
abuseWhoa! Update soon!
crzygrl
2006-09-03
ch 2,
abusehey i liked the story it was awsome but i hope they make it out ok and that the cops get to them on time...ne way i liked the story.
Sahariah
2006-04-19
ch 2,
abuseYou killed SARA!? In the SECOND chapter?!?! I can't believe it! She can't be dead. This is a pretty intense story. Please update soon! I'm dying here- no pun intended :P

Sahariah
gsr4ever323
2006-04-18
ch 2,
abuseThe Song Be My Escape By Relient K Reminds Me Of Your Story
This Is A Good Story So Sad :( But Good
MrsEads
2006-03-27
ch 2,
abuseNONONO! SHE CAN'T DIE! Update soon, PLEASE! (But, on the plus side, this is REALLY well-written)
CSigurlie07
2006-03-23
ch 2,
abusebut, but... Wha?! What the heck was that? You trying to give me a heart attack? How could you kill off Sara? You're gonna resuscitate her, right?
knadineg
2006-03-23
ch 2,
abuseI've reviewed :D. So what happens next?
Dybdahl
2006-03-23
ch 2,
abuseyou are cruel. poor greg, you really are trying to make a mental case out of him.
marya
2006-03-23
ch 2, anon.
abuseplease tell me english is your second language. third? fourth?

or just promise me you won't ever write again - that would be a present to us all :)
asdjkfdaskjfajk!!!
2006-03-23
ch 2, anon.
abuseIt's SARA, not SARAH.

It's a HAMMER, not a HAMMAR.

It's HASTILY, not HASTELY.

It's LAID, not LAYED.

Also, the plot blowed rabbit chunks. The end.
oh my god.
2006-03-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh great day.

Um, first? Spell check. Please, for the love of god, spell check.

Then there's the fact that I really am not sure what is going on in this story. Aside from the fact that you wanted to put Sara & Greg in danger so they could later get it on. There are *so* many other ways to accomplish that.

The thing about making Greg be molested? Came out of nowhere. Made no sense.

I just. I can't review anymore. YOUR STORY BROKE MY BRAIN.
ObessedTWFan
2006-03-22
ch 2,
abuseShe's Dead?! That cant be right, many live through gunshots to teh stomach, which I know she DOES. Awesome Job, had be sitting on teh edge of seat.
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