aw, still sweet! its rlly good how every1 in ur fics is always in character... ;) tis gr8! keep up the good work!

:D MSC

good if a lil short

I like. Your penname and your story. Looking forward to more. :)

I'm looking!

and i liked this one too. enjoyed the switch from sam's pov to jacks. also liked how the previous one which dealt with a more cerebral function (conversation) was from the more cerebral of the noncouple, and how this one was from the more phyiscal of the two and was from the pov of the more phyiscal of the two.

enjoy the rest of your week.

Poor Jack and Sam! It's evil they never got together.

But always. It's cool getting Jack's point of view too. Keep writing and update soon.

I like It! please write more!