I read every time we touch (brilliant, love the alternate ending) and I kept on meaning to read this. I finally have and its great. Good job! I think there should have been a battle with Garland but whatever its an amazing story. keep writing:D

Aw! That was so cute! I loved this ending/epilogue. It was so sweet. Great job! _

Wah! Vivi!

Besides that sad part it was a sweet ending. You know, one of those endings where you have to go "Aw!".

Great story! And you're making an 'Alexandrian Idol' thing? Oh god...this should be very interesting . And you're planning on making a SI? Sweet. Can't wait to read your future stories!

that was awsome you should continue

Very interesting. I like your stories. Hopefully, Zidane will get back to normal. Well, I'll find out in your next update.

Tabansi232

“Eiko?” I can hear Dagger calling me. “Coming!”

Okay, here's what I think about chapter eight. You're so much better putting things in paragraphs. That's a tremendous improvement! But, I still think that you shouldn't use as many tags as you do. If you want a more detailed explanation email me back, and I'll give you one.

Wow vivi and zidane so sad :(

plz continue

Wow, you killed off Zidane and Vivi. That's something I wasn't expecting-interesting plot twist. But again, you must divide up the paragraphs better. When a different character speaks add a new paragraph.

plz continue

Hey there! I thought I'd check out your stories since you checked out mine. I think you have a good plot, but you must break your paragraphs up better. It's really confusing with who's talking and whatnot, because it's all crunched together.

Other than that, keep me informed with updates!

plz continue

Hehe I like it as I am a sorta Kuja fan so its gd! Love it so far so update asap!

I love the way you write your fics.!

Great job and I'm awaiting chapter 2.

*Does a "Sonic thumbs up"*