I'm rereading this so I can read the sequel without being lost and I just had a few questions. For one thing, why is Beryl showing up when the girls are adults? Did the AWW universe start with the R season (and ChibiUsa) and go from there? Also, where are the Outer senshi? You mention the Amazon Quartet, so they must have been around at some point. I would think they'd keep in touch with the Inners somehow. Are you going to focus on them at any point?

Except for a few things I don't understand, I really like this series. It blends the dub and the original very well, and most of the dub-related information is explained in a plausible way. I love the interaction between the guys; I always love a good fanfic that lets Mamoru find his friends again.

This was a perfectly amazing story! Just enough tears and jokes to keep it interesting but not lose the plot along the way! I absolutely loved it and I can't wait to check out your other stories!! I know it's been years since you've finished this, but every little bit of love for your work helps right? haha I know this is long, but that's pretty much all I wanted to say (though there is more.. but I'm starting to ramble...)

ooSBGoo

I loved this! I liked that some of the manga was included, as well as the dub and the original anime. The explanation of so much, like Venus as leader, was very good. I also loved the twist that Hitler was an evil b*st*rd in the past but STILL got his butt kicked! I also found it really nice that you were able to pull off the "exchange student" cliche, as well as the "American Generals" trope so well. So the evil clones were really made from mirrors? All in all a very great read. I don't really approve of the amount of booze consumed, however. :D

I'm only about a third of the way in, but I love this all ready! I know it is actually common for foreign students to take American names (my friend Zhoung Zhoung is named Lucy here) so that's cool. I love the melding of dub and original, since I love both versions. And Zach Is Jewish; how neat! The brand references are a little distracting, but they do make the story more personal. I bet the bad generals are clones or something. But why are the bad guys back? Or is this basicaly an AU of the first season? Can't wait to read the rest!

I'll be honest. I didn't think this would be my cup of tea - not being a huge fan of the college boy lifestyle. But you've made a convert of me - this story is both realisitc and hilarious. I loved it. It's very orginal and fun. You did a great job, in my estimation.
Party on!

re-read the whole story again
it was even more amazing the second time
i wish u would write the sequel but its upto u
i'll be waiting!
AMAZING WRITING by the way
:)

I'm bugging you for the sequel! Please please please update it because I can't find any senshi/shitennou fantastic modern day stories like this one.
You rock.

This is really good. I re-read about three times.

MAN! THIS ISNT A EPILOGUE, ITS A HOLE DAMNN!! CHAPTER!
DAMN MIGHT AS WELL CALLED IT CHAPRTER 14. GO STORY THOUGH

THAT WAS FREAKING AMAZING!
I almost cried like a zillion times and the rest of the time i was cracking my head off
amazing
ur an amazing writer, its like they're more real than I am, and only very gifted writers can do that

so help me god, there had better be a sequel when i go check
or else... i'll uh tell the girls that the boys were smoking pot the night before!

loved the story!

That's cute, the last line.
'Kevin snuck another glance at her face instead.'
Please update As We Are, even though I know it's probably a lost cause, seeing as it's been like five years.

I loved your "Senshi soup" :)

I'm fascinated by this story! Will it turn out that the generals have human identities and don't realize they're evil and transform unwittingly much as Darien did in the beginning? I was hoping you could clarify the AU via author's notes or something. The senshi are in college, but they've only just discovered they're senshi? Are you rewriting the first season but setting it later in time? Also, the formatting of this seems to be wonky.

Gods, this is brilliant! Absolutely genius! I love love love the idea of using the Japanese and the dub names to mean something completely different- and the Shittenou are back! Er, the real Shittenou!

Superb!

I've gotta hand it to you, you really know how to get into the minds of college students.

I'm very, extremely impressed at how well you kept the distinct personalities separate and unique. The dialogue was fantastic, and I love how it all sounded so realistic. This could easily be a college-age comedy movie. It's got gags, humor, sex, sports... everything.

But it isn't. It's a Sailor Moon fic! And I thought it was very clever how you separated the good guys from the bad guys by using the different translations of their names. The action scenes were good, but were made even better by the humor and conversation. Oh, and the humor... It's so easy to fall back on slapstick and low brow, but you kept it smart and witty, and so very in character with that age group.

I applaud you. So many characters to juggle, an extensive plot... but it was all done so very well. This is probably my favorite SM fic, if the handful of times that I've read and reread are proofs. You even made me like Serena! Thank you for writing this.