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| Batman'sBeauty18 2007-04-15 ch 1,  | abuseI don't sleep with murderers? Uh...buddy...you were the one who killed Kell in cold blood. |
| Marianne H. Stillie 2006-05-13 ch 5, | abuseThis is so VERY sweet and a perfect Ronon/Liz resolution. As for me, I'm working on a Ronon/Elizabeth offworld drama adventure like the one I'd love to see in canon but with the established relationship already there from my Lines series. Give me another week. In the meantime, what's your next R/L project? HEHEHE Marianne |
| Alipeeps 2006-05-10 ch 2, | abuseThis is an interesting fic idea but there are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes in here which keep distracting me from the story. Getting someone to beta-read for you and help tidying up the grammar and spelling would help make the fic a lot more enjoyable for your readers. |
| Eileen Blazer 2006-05-09 ch 5, | abuse"Elizabeth couldn't sleep and it was all Ronon's fault." That was a good line. I like how it kind of sets the mood for the rest of the piece. And the end was really nice. A good way to finish off the series. Yay. You did an awesome job with these. The first was a definite favorite, but they are all v. good. Cheers! |
| Eileen Blazer 2006-05-09 ch 4, | abuseAww, look at Ronan standing up for himself. *is proud*. Aww, but the break up. *is sad* |
| Eileen Blazer 2006-05-09 ch 3, | abuseOh. Caldwell! "Leaving so that he didn't have to see her. See her forget him." Loved that. Liz plays dirty. She must get it from you. |
| Eileen Blazer 2006-05-09 ch 2, | abuseThis part is lovely. I love how they both compromise in this. Compromise is good. Except when it isn't (but here, it is). |
| Eileen Blazer 2006-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI've read this before. I really like it. Especially, even. This always strikes me as one of the more real encounters in a Roz relationship, even if it is a bit dark. |
| Marianne H. Stillie 2006-05-07 ch 4, | abuseYou're doing a GREAT job with this dark-side view of a Ronon/Liz relationship. I'm really looking forward to the fireworks that should come with part 5's reconciliation. PLEASE DON'T TAKE TOO LONG! Marianne |
| Marianne H. Stillie 2006-03-25 ch 2, | abuseAnother great piece of work! When's the next one coming? Marianne |
| Marianne H. Stillie 2006-03-25 ch 1, | abuseThis piece is so dark and heavy but so appropriate for the events of "Michael". Great work! Marianne |
| kathgrr 2006-03-23 ch 2, | abuseI love these two together - so much potential. I like the bit about the difference between lonely and alone and how she understood what Ronon was saying with just from a simple touch of her hair. Hope to see more! |
| ascii27 2006-03-15 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was heavy. I love this pairing and I love your writing. I put you on my author alert so I don't miss anything. Now I'm picking up your DC stuff too. Ever do any WonderWoman stuff? How 'bout WW/Flash? Just an idea. Please continue with this series. Hope they make up next time. |