Reviews for All the Dreams that Might Have Been

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Senini 2008-07-05 ch 15, anon.	abuseThanks for the update; I've been looking forward to this. I really like Anya; she's lovely without being a dominant force, and has managed to pull off having most characteristics of a Mary-Sue without even coming CLOSE to being one. I also like Edmund's unease with emotional thinking; it suits him, and it makes for a sweet undertone. aThank you!
XlinzX 2008-07-04 ch 15,	abuseyay!! updates!! lol still loving it so much!! keep going! XlinzX
Sesshans 2008-07-03 ch 15,	abuseOh!,I just finished recently the books and i had been looking for fics, this is the best one than I have found! , I love it, i love the pair of Caspian and Lucy, and of course i love all about Edmund. I have read your history in a day and die to read all others chapters, really i don't sleep because of that, hahahahaahaha. And please make your chapters as long as you need your fic is amazing!
Recycled Paper Addict 2008-07-03 ch 15,	abuseThis was fantastic. Anya is just right for Edmund and Lucy seems just as in love as ever. Keep it up. Rosie
shygryf 2008-07-02 ch 15,	abuseso good to see another chapter!
Narnian Lily 2008-07-02 ch 15,	abuseYay! Another chapter! And no need to apologize for the length, I love that it was long. This chapter was brilliant. So very intricate and so much progress was made. I like the personal side of Edmund's point of view, and all of Lucy's little philosophical quips were quite funny. They understand each other like only siblings can. And speaking of which, I liked when Edmund and Lucy exchanged one glance over the document that said volumes. Very well done. Thanks so much for not abandoning this story!
titpuce86 2008-07-02 ch 15,	abusepersonnally I didn't mind the lenght (quite the contrary, the longer, the better ^_^). i find this chapter really, really good and I'm happy things seem to go better for Narnia and Archenland's relations. Do hope that Edmund will let himself fall in love with Anya, as they appear to make a fine couple. Looking forward for the next chapter.
breebree33 2008-07-02 ch 15, anon.	abuseWhen I saw this story on the new updates section, I burst into tears. I had, I admit, begun to lose hope in another update. But then I saw chapter 15 up and devoured it like a starved man would a feast. And I took zealous joy in the fact it was so deliciously long! Incredible chapter, by the way, everything is flowing absolutely magnificently, and the Edmund/Anya thing on the side is lovely. Reunite Lucy with dearest Caspian soon, and I'd love to see how he's doing. And above all Please UPDATE. Your most faithful fan(seriously, I'm in awe of your skill, Bree
abyssgirl 2008-07-02 ch 15,	abuseabsolutely brilliant! hugs
rotem 2008-07-02 ch 15, anon.	abusethe next chapter you have to do with caspian in it
Politics.and.Prose 2008-07-02 ch 15,	abuseI will admit to being more than a little excited when I got the notice in my inbox that there was another chapter. I know I've mentioned this before but I LOVE this storyline (or should I say THESE storylineS). Well done and I am excited to read more. And, I have to admit, I still giggle at the idea of Caspian and Eustace alone on a mission. I'm sure, even with Eustace's "new" personality, Caspian must be at his wit's end at some points. Well, all that to say FANTASTIC and I hope you update soon!
x.Princess.Eli.x 2008-07-01 ch 14,	abuseOh... wow! I just read all of your story so far - its fabulous! I can't wait for you to update. I saw Prince Caspian the other day and I think I actually screamed when Caspian kissed Susan at the end. I mean, come on, in the next film it'll be all, 'oh, screw Susan, I love her sister now,' and then Susan will hate Lucy and there'll be a huge family feud =O Mwahahaha - I might be a bit over the top, but other than that, I quite enjoyed the film - Trumpkin was awesome! Have you seen it yet? Don't forget to update! ;)
breebree33 2008-06-26 ch 14, anon.	abuseI re-read this story in my bedroom on a rainy day in june when I truly and completely fell in love with the Lucian ship. I didn't realize before, but it is just so amazing. This story is interesting and beautifully written. And I want Lucy to meet little Miraz! Oh, and Caspian as a father-like figure was so sweet. When he was comforting Miraz after his nightmare, i was like "AW!" I love the two of them together, but like i said, I can't wait for Lucy to be thrown in the mix. I have a feeling that they will all be so cute together. Finally, I beg you to UPDATE please. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
Politics.and.Prose 2008-06-26 ch 14,	abuseI LOVE this story. Please, if you get a chance, update it. I've loved both that I've read by you (you've really turned me into a Lucy/Caspian fan)! You're writing all of the characters very well!!
abyssgirl 2008-06-24 ch 14,	abuseabsolutely superb, just like the prequel. please update soon!

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