Aw, at least she still has Souta-chan.

I've always thought Kagome's mother must be a very strong person to always so cheerfully give up her daughter to another world. This poem also kind of reminds me of the mother in Peter Pan, waiting so patiently for her "innocent, gay, and heartless" children.

T.T Aww! That was so sweet!

Poor MamaHigurashi. If I was her, I wouldn't be able to stand having my daughter always gone, wondering when she'd come home, if she ever will come home again...

Creativity: 10

Style of Writing: 10

Grammar/Spelling: 10

Enjoyment: 10

Overal rating: 10

Good job! Ja!

Saki-chan

How sad. Beautiful poem. I love how it flows. Great job on capturing Kagome's mother like that. Hope you don't mind if I add this to my C2.

Wow that was really good. I'll bet Kagome's Mom does do that though. She seems the type. I gues I have never thought about what Kagome's being absent all the time would have on her mother. I thought about her brother... wow that is a real eye-opener. It was really good. Gotta run. Ja ne!

beautiful

This was good.. Kinda Heart tugging..But good.. Nice writting,, Keep it up..

Mari

Great job on this and it kind of makes you realized how much her family must miss her

What a wonderful poem. It's too easy to forget that the ones who wait are heros like the ones they are waiting for.

Very bittersweet. Makes ya wish Kagome /could/ come home more often.