OMG I LOVE IT
please please update son!

MAN! THAT WAS AWESOME! you make them come to life! well, in my mind at least... are you gonna continue this story? i saw the final update ended at 2006... PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING! PLEASE!

I like the story and I hope you're still updating.

I really like this! It's got a really good plot me thinks and its all gd! Update!

Hm...You did A-Ok on this one! Update A.S.A.P, ok? Or else...-thinks of a threat- Or else you don't want to find out WHAT the or else is! ;) Just update quickly, n'kay?

Wa!!Your fic is very well!! I this liking a lot of n.n. It is the first time that write a review in English and I feel rare... ehem, if when read this see some rare thing is that my english is not very good xD, Good, I expect that continue the quick!!

Ankin

Oh an update!
I liked this chapter alot. Can not wait to find out what happens next and how they manage to find the assassin(s). Looks like Gippal's going to get violent towards the baddies, ooh what a shame... hehehe

I love. :-)

Then, out of nowhere, a very well-timed Cid appeared.

"Well if it ain't the boy from Zanarkand who died!" Cid said loudly.

XD I don't know if it was supposed to be funny...but it made me laugh out loud, haha.

Anyway, the plot is interesting and the story is written extremely well. I commend you for that. :)

Expecting an update!

~Love, xXPnBXx

wow... interesting beginning.. keep up the good work ^_^

I love the first chapter. Update ASAP!

I like it, I do, I do! The light spheres remind me of the ever-shattering light globes from The Black Unicorn by Tanith Lee. Anyhow... Gimme more!

really good start to your story. Got my attention and kept it. looking forward to see how it pans out.