Reviews for The Enemy Without

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CedarPineSpruce 2007-10-28 ch 113,	abuseWhat a satisfying story! Looking back at the original Campers! story, you have created a beautiful, engaging, intelligent series. I am thankful to have found it.
celticas 2007-10-10 ch 36,	abuseagain nitpicking, wasnt the rings built by the Ancients around the same time they built the stargates (ie why the Ori have some) and thus Ian would have also been some help in that area?
celticas 2007-10-10 ch 35,	abuseumm, sorry to m=nitpick but isnt there closer to 9 billion people in the world not 4?
celticas 2007-10-09 ch 2,	abuseI know that you asked people not to be picky about your technobabble but how on earth (or otherwise) wouls they get and IDC befor the wormhole had engaged? the idea is that the IDC is a radio signal that is transmitted from the GDOs to the SGCs computers and each team or race has their own signal which can be changed that allows the airmen on duty to identify the incomming travellers.
smithcrafter 2007-06-01 ch 113,	abuseReally long in number of chapters, but each chapter wasn't all that long. It might look less intimidating to readers if you went back and combined some of the chapters so the story was 30-40 longer chapters instead of 113 short ones. I have really enjoyed this entire series, as you can probably tell by the speed with which I've gone throgh the stories. smithcrafter
Heather 2006-11-29 ch 113, anon.	abuseStill love them all. Will you write about Ian and his adventures in Atlantis? Thank you Favorite line was when Ian's Mom said she could write Ian a pass if need be.
caligate 2006-10-17 ch 113,	abuseWow! I cannot really express how much I have enjoyed the campers series. This AU that you have created with our favorite characters and the new ones are superb. I have just finished reading all of them. Of course, my favorite character would have to be Jaffer, but then I am sure probably he was about everyones. I hope that you will be able to write a story about Ian in Atlantis or maybe a future story about Ian and Cassie and all the boys. Something that maybe picks up on when you had the older Shawn come from the future. Thanks for all the effort that you have put into these stories.
Rignach 2006-10-17 ch 113,	abuseI needed a week to read all the campers stories but I'm glad that I did. I did'n want to really. I friend was pointing it out that I must:). Nothing to do with you or your writing. I'm not that found of most of the Jack/Sam stories but your take on it is great because it is only one tiny detail and no one lost out for it. And it is believalbe (sp?) You have used the alien allies fantastic and created even better orginal characters but you are using Ian Brooks, a bit to much in my opinion. As character he is wonderful but if you going to continue I fear you will turn him in another Mackay. Turn it down at last a tiny bit. I would be shame to lose what makes your Ian Brooks unique. And I dearly hope you will continue with it some time in the future. Thank you for writing and sharing.
ShadowDemoness413 2006-10-08 ch 113,	abuseI loved it. I thought it was a little long, but also if it had been shorter it would've seemed lacking. So in that sense it was the perfect length. Favorite line... the last one, no doubt about it... although the joke that Ian made about Jack not being able to waste his youth in front of the TV was pretty good too :-P
LetitiaRichards 2006-10-07 ch 113,	abuseI thought it was about time I let you know how much I have enjoyed the whole series of 'Campers' stories. I will be sorry to see it end, and of course would love to read about their last mission before they all go their separate ways. I would have loved to follow their lives forever, but that's your prerogative to end it here. Thanks for sharing such a great series, and I hope to read whatever stories you feel you want to write in the near future.
spacemonkey1129 2006-10-06 ch 11,	abuseHow are these ppl going to save earth when many of them have personal beefs w/one another ? Please tell me that Ian eventually gets sick of Mckays mouth &belts him.I'd pay to see that !
spacemonkey1129 2006-10-06 ch 9,	abuseIan &mckay!?!?!?!?!?!? they wil lmost likly kill each other if left alone for too long!
spacemonkey1129 2006-10-06 ch 6,	abuseThe gate going public out of need will not be pretty !
spacemonkey1129 2006-10-06 ch 5,	abuseIs it just me or is Rodney a real P.I.T.A.! I know this is your own little AU but does atlantis exsist in this 'verse? I'm going to take a stab at it &say no, am I correct?Other wise Rodney would be annoying the crew of atlantis instead of the SGC.
spacemonkey1129 2006-10-06 ch 4,	abuseRODNEY! RODNEY!I hope Hammond plans on keeping him &Sam at oppisite ends of the base?!?!?!?!How will Rod react when he learns of Sams' marriage to Jack?You just like to muck up the waters,don't ya?

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