 moonchick 5/30/01 . chapter 1 Only just saw HASB so ahd to avoid this one until I'd seen it. Intersting idea to have him check up on Charlie and Case. The annoyance at himself over what happened to Tinga is very trre to him along with his protectiveness. I loved the last line where he said 'it was time he started acting as if he did' as I for one would be interested to see if he could ever admit something like that to a fellow X5, he's such a closed person, emotionally I mean. Anyway, another great Zack characterisation. Keep the good work up. |