Nice so far, but I was wondering if you could e-mail me the whole fic. Since I have nothing to do now, I thought about checking out this site and your fic cought my eye. It would be great if you could send it to me.

Sweet!

that was awesome! i loved it! good job.
keep writing,
karen

Wow! I loved this story so much, I'm writing a review for the first time ever! It's great how you kept them both so in character. Please write more chapters... please? :)

lol. Is this a ONESHOT!? *gasps in horror* PLEASE don't tell me it is! *faints*
Story alert, JUST IN CASE!!

Usually I stop reading the moment Ori's going all "I Heart Kurosaki-kun" but I stuck it out because I like your work and I'm glad I did. Very nice perspective on this and I liked her last daydream of Ichi and Rukia meeting in private lol. *thumbs up*

KSM

very well written. i really enjoyed it^^

Love the subtext in this ;)

wow , great story!! I really love the way u write , thsi story goes to my favs,

Greetzz Tharuka

Nice story. even though it would be great if you made another chapter, but since you ended it there I hope to see more of your work/

That was soo sweet. I'm a girl,yeah but that was just so moving i didn't really mind...

Ehh..but I think you should change the rating or something like that cuz little kids might...erm..trod on this by accident and you know..

Recommendation: I think it would sound better if you interchange the names. Most Bleach fans would prefer the Japanese way of naming people

Rukia Kuchiki > Kuchiki Rukia.

And the thing about Orihime spacing out was just fantastic. Now I know why it's called "Secret".

46/50

Hehehehehehe! CUTE!! Need to get more of this sweetness!! Awe, will Tatsuki EVER tell Orihime how she feels!? Gah...This is so good, and I really hope you write more! Soo exciting...Heh, nice job! ((waits patiently for more))

Aw. What an adorable fanfic. That was really brilliant, and I enjoyed it. You did a good job… I'd be excited to read more of your work. *Adds to author alert list* Write more soon. :)

cute!