Lovely! I really like this look at how much they've changed. :)

Haplo and Marit, two of my favorite characters, I love the bittersweet atmosphere of this, and sometimes its good to have a lot going on even in a short piece. I enjoyed reading it. Take care, Karrenia

Patryn plus fluff? No way...

Besides that, good fic generally. Good prose and emotion. It has a calmness to it.

good good good!

Oh, I love this! Fluffiness Patryn-style, wonderfull. I love it how you let the different stages of their relationship go by in Marit's mind as she compares Haplo's past and present appearance. (It also helps that I have a bit of a hair-fetish.)

Finally another Haplo x Marit shipper! _

aw... how sweet! Merit was such a cool character. I think that you wrote her very well. Great job!

Hey that was a good piece of writing. The way you described the scars, Marit's reactoin... It's touching I like it.

Aw, very sweet. I like very much. :)