Gah! Jonathan says he's not like Jackson but he's actually a lot like him. Now I gotta go read the third part of this.

(Applause). Great! I think I'm sick...I really enjoyed this story but everything is a blur. I'm actually not feeling that great! This was really good. I can't wait to read the last story of this trilogy, but I'll do it later when I'm feeling better. You did a great job.

Lisa, I feel bad for her. I really don't see her as this weak, but this is your interpretation, and after everything she's been through, this is a believable state for her.

Really nice job,

Amber

And the duality never ends. I had to at least comment on it. Jackson is bad, but good and so is Jonathan. Jackson would want him to fix Lisa, but if she's fixed Jonathan is going to break her again, right? Wow what a paradox this story is building itself to be. It makes my head hurt, but I need to know more. (insert goofy smile).

I loved your last line: "Whether she wanted to or not."

I get a forboding feeling from that.

-Amber

And even Jonathan is shown to be a twisted individual...I see a repeat of "Always"...he's just going to gain her trust and then break her like Jackson. The similarities are scary, but I do believe Crane would act like this.

Lisa, you are in for one heck of a ride. I pray you're safe in this.

-Amber

So his long lost twin brothr...that's been done, but I have no other to explain it so that was fine! What interested me the most was Scarecrow. Insanity runs in that family like water in a river, huh? This is really great, though! I absolutely love it! I'm glad Jonathan was able to gain control again, that was great! How long, though, until Scarecrow's back and out for more? Poor Lisa...

Onto the next chapter to satisfy my curiosity!

-Amber

I think Dr. Crane will overstep lines to get what he wants too. Can I tell you how I love the idea of bringing him in? I've heard of it happening in both fandoms, but yours is the first I've read. I really like this. He seems nice, but I have to yet to see what happens now. I did really enjoy this chapter, Dr. Crane was sweet and I loved that he was disturbed by the resemblance between him and Jackson...and Lisa was sad, I just want to hug her.

I can't wait to find out what happens next so off I go to the next chapter!

-Amber

And I'm back! I feel bad for her. I can't really understand her situation (I think she's off her rocker too), but I believe it stems from conflicting emotions. Despite knowing that as Amy Jackson was only screwing with her mind, he was kind to her and it can confuse, and as Lisa she hates him. So she has two different images of Jackson to deal with and that could drive any person insane. So I want to hug her, but all-in-all I believe that Jackson being out of the picture is a better deal for all.

I've also been in therapy (definitely not for what Lisa went through), but my therapist was nice. This is really great, on to the next chapter!

-Amber

Hmm,even though Jonathan hated Jackson for what he did to him,they still had that bond of being twin brothers.And I strongly suspect that the reason he zapped poor Lisa with his fear toxin,was to get *even* with her for killing his brother. And as for Jonathan marrying Lisa and claiming Jackson's daughter as his own,means to me that Jonathan wanted what was once Jackson's. This would be HIS revenge against Jackson. :(

WTF? You ended it? Well...sorry I haven't reviewed for them all...I just catch up on my reading on the weekends. Anyway, NICE JOB. Is there a sequel? I think there is...

Well, if it's any consulation, I think Jonathan would at least make a better father than Jackson would have. Can't wait to read the first chapter of your new story!

If Lisa thinks her contractions are bad now, she hasn't seen anything yet! I'm starting to wonder if we'll see a big change in Jonathan's attitude and treatment of Lisa once that baby arrives. Update soon.

Crane is one manipulative s.o.b. Let's hope Jim and Joe get the drop on him soon. Can't wait to see what happens when they exhume Jackson's body. If he's not in there, well...I won't know what to think!

I have a feeling that Lisa is going to regret following Jonathan to work. Can't wait to see what she uncovers. Update soon.

It is a cliffhanger...I keep wondering when Lisa will realize that he's simply taking advantage of her...feel so badly for her...anyway, the mpd aspect is interesting and you perhaps could do that...how would you describe their similarities though if they aren't twins? A doppleganger? Anyway, all these possibilities. Please update soon!

Living in domestic bliss with Jonathan Crane...yikes. Still, he seems to be more stable than his brother at this point. Who knows how long that will last!