This fanfic is just... beautiful. I wish it were longer because I just...
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...yeah...

I'm not one for RPF, and haven't been on for a long while, but let me just say that this story makes me glad I stopped to read. Amazing voices, fun concept. The works. I'd love to see more with Mal v. Nathan, or even a short of Mal in Nathan's world. That said, it works amazingly as a self-contained thing, and feels wholly complete. Beautiful job. Thank you greatly. It made my night. :D

I remember reading "Visit to a Small Planet" and "Visit to a Small Planet Revisited" many years ago when I was first getting into fandom. Back then, Trek fandom was about all there was. This was a wonderful trip down memory lane, and even surpassed the original story in many ways. Great story, told well. Keep up the good work, and keep writing!

Gorgeous, I have to say. Your dialogue was spot-on, I loved the way poor Nathan kept getting sucked into Mal's headspace, and it even had a very show-like plot. What's *not* to love?

I realize that, a year and more later, we're not likely to see an epilogue nor a compainion piece, but a girl can dream...

I LOVED IT, it was so good!! It seemed to me that you've really got Nathan down. Good job!

Wow! What a great concept and I must say extremely well written. I found the dialogue very much in character (meaning the actual characters, not Nathan of course as I have no more idea of his character than any of us) and with just the right amount of wit and action to fit right in to the Firefly universe.

Also makes me excited for this year's Flanvention...wink, wink. :o)

-Moki

Way cool ... Mal finding himself at a convention and having everyone thinking that he was Nathan-playing-Mal. Very shiny !

Nice plot twist to get him out of trouble with the Larkins !

Great stuff!

This is one of the funniest fanfics I've seen ! And it's JUST as funny seen from the perspective of Nathan ending up as Mal on Serenity, as it is to consider that perhaps it's all Mal's bad dream (or maybe he's delusional or temporarily gone mad)

this is one of the most brilliant stories ever! and the fact that Wash is alive makes me HAPPY! seriously LOVED it!

Needless to say this chapter was awesome as all others. I'm so sad that this is over :( I'm going to miss this story so much, I hope you write another story soon cause as strange as this might sound, I'm going to miss you lol Your work is just so great. I love this story. I cant believe i'm this sad about it-ok i'll shut up about that now, you did such an awesome job. Cant wait to read more from you.

Fan-friggin'-tastic! Really! Look forward to much more from you. And I think Nathan Fillion (and the rest of the cast) would get a kick out of this.

That was really, really great! Awesome, seriously. It made me all warm and fuzzy inside. :)

"Around him the “We’re-Not-Gonna-Kill-Mal-But-We’re-Celebrating-Anyway” party was just getting to the amusing stage where anyone of a sober and conscientious nature had either succumbed to peer pressure or left to hide until it all blew over. About 30 Larkins were doggedly entertaining themselves around the yard. Fresh kegs had been tapped, musicians were playing as if their instruments were on fire (which was, in one case, entirely accurate), and the sporadic dancing had devolved into the rhythmic lurching and vertical foreplay of the determined drunkard" “A strategic apple orchard!” sorry had to get that in, that made me laugh so hard. and wash and jayne falling off, the hilarity consumed me! I absolutely loved this story! Seriusly, I adored this. It was so well written and everything. Put the biggest smile on my face after my exam today, hope you writre a new one soon!
Ava