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two-headed fiesta
2008-03-28 . chapter 1
i like it better as a oneshot. i like this ending.

you know what it reminds me of? the ending of ffx and the ending of ffx2. the latter could've been done without. it somewhat spoiled a previously perfect ending, however sour it may seem. sure, i'm positive that if you did continue, it would be fine - ah, parallels, my favorite - but without is just fine and even better. we have inventive minds for some reason or another, after all. (:

but good job. i like the lack of predictability. its nice.
CuDdLe GuRL
2007-11-22 . chapter 1
are you kidding?

DUH ANOTHER CHAPTER! you can't leave it like this

... that's just not right...
Midnight Shard
2006-07-23 . chapter 1
I loved it so much! i'm adding this to my favourites.
Dizzied
2006-07-04 . chapter 1
Aw, that was seriously so cute! I love your stories and how you describe the moment.
GeorgiaPeaches
2006-06-20 . chapter 1
One shot? 'nother chapter!! Please? =)
-Sarah
hoping for sin
2006-03-29 . chapter 1
Oh my god! Loved it. Write more, please!?!?
The ending is set up for more, so take advantage of it!
Come on, you know you want to.
And you'd make me happy.
Very happy indeed
FufuChan
2006-03-24 . chapter 1
I liked it a lot! really!!
Hm... how about... 'to be continued' ? ^^
Larien
2006-03-21 . chapter 1
I LOVED this one! :D Incredibly cute, and just...good. As always, wonderful work!!
Canada Eh
2006-03-21 . chapter 1
Wow!! I could totally see this becoming longer, the ending is very suspensful. Not to say it isn't awesome the way it is :P

I liked the way you made the characters personalities. I thought the whole "falling off the cliff" thing was a little fast, but well done all the same.

All in all, I loved it! And I really hope you do continue :D
Selffie
2006-03-19 . chapter 1
Oneshot?

As in, a question?
As in, it's not already-for-sure a oneshot?

Then, you need to continue it. For my sanity, for my mental health, for... my cat. Yes, definitely my cat, because I am prone to angry outbursts when I don't get what I want.

Plus, I'm sure we'd all like to know what Aunt Jehna said that made such a lasting impact on our pathetic little Gippal.

Oh, yes, and kudos, I liked it. :D
Little Pyrefly
2006-03-18 . chapter 1
OMG! That was great! I'd love it if you continued! Please?
frizz.i.am
2006-03-18 . chapter 1
YAY! I love when you have new stories. This one was so adorable you captured the personality and relationship of these two very well! Have you even played FFX-2 Yet?
Starling94
2006-03-17 . chapter 1
aww this is great. I haven't been on in a long time, but I really liked this when i read the summary. I read it and was really happy that I did. It was a refreshing story. Nothing to quick, but refreshing. Great job.
Warui-Usagi
2006-03-17 . chapter 1
Very cute! I think that you could turn this into a little 2-3 chapter story and it would work out really well! I thought this was great in any case, even if you decide not to continue it.
whereowhere-is-my-rabbit
2006-03-17 . chapter 1
YAY! an update! i swear,you brighten up my day (or night) whenever i read your fics. Don't make it a oneshot! Please! I'm dying for Gikku fics and this one has potential to be developed.
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