Loved the story so far. I see you haven't updated in awhile. Are you done with this story? Please let me know!

wonderfuly job!

loved it! can't wait for more! glad Colin is all right!

Well this chapter made me all fuzzy inside. Well the end of it did with the Colin/Jess moment. I'm glad Raya is going to help them take down her father. I think that also partained to the fuzzy-ness even though I've never like daughters or sons betraying their parents in a story, it's so repetative. But it works in this so I guess it's alright.

Now, keep up the great work and update when you can.

Great story! Can't wait till you update!

This is a wonderful story so far. A few grammar mistakes, but nothing you have to worry about. It's just comma's being in the wrong spots. But I do so the same thing so I'm not really going to mind them, I would be a hypocrite if I did care about them.

Neways, I can't wait to see what happens next. So please update soon.

love this story already!

WOnderfully Done PLease update soon!

I love this story it is awesome. Please update soon

Love the story Idear lookforward to reading more.

Happy writing