Your story is wonderful. You're an amazingly talented writer.

Aw.
;.;
That made me happy in a sad kind of way. You probably know. It's how the end of H.R. makes you feel. ;.;

What? No! That was excellent! It could develop into so much more, so PLEASE don't leave it at that. Do I really need to make a fool out of myself and beg? Don't think I won't!

Okay, enough of me acting the fool. I really did like this story and it moved me like many stories recently haven't. I do hope you continue, but it is a good ending as well.

... :Sniff: aww... that was soo sweet!! Do u think u could make it an official story? like add chapters and stuff?

aw...^.^! so cute! i enjoyed it

nice! keep it up!