Reviews for The Color Bronze

Cad2u 2007-11-22 ch 1,	abusecool story! are you gonna write any more because i can see a great plot coming along!
Fia 2007-06-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat! Gr, I can't STAND people like those two boys! Creepy jerks, the whole lot of them!
clara200 2007-02-05 ch 1,	abuseHe's such a pain. I hope his brother improves with a dragon.
Morrigan's Wings 2006-10-18 ch 1,	abuseExcellent story,but the last scentence could have been better.
ginalee 2006-09-26 ch 1,	abuseI just love it when bullies get theirs - please, tell me more!!
Rimmersworld 2006-08-14 ch 1,	abuseit was a good story.more would be good.
SwiftShadow 2006-06-11 ch 1,	abuseI like it! The poor blue though. sniffle At least he didn't stay with Kardolang. Great story/one-shot!
shanie 2006-05-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love this story too! Hopefully you add on to this! Keep writing! If you add on more, it'll make my day!
lilybee 2006-03-18 ch 1,	abuseInteresting. Great work, I love your writing and I can see how the arrogance works. I just feel for blue. I would have been happier if Deblith had shown some interest only,bypassing him to get to the other, even if scorned, not trying to get him. As your green in the other story.
RainbowAlchemist 2006-03-16 ch 1,	abuseyes! ah sweet satisfaction. that was awesome. i would have had Zelith try to eat Kardolang though, that would've been funny.