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| Gaara's Little Kitty 2008-05-15 ch 10, anon. | abuseI loved the belly dancing story alot but this one is so much beter nice job |
| mintxrain 2008-05-11 ch 10,  | abusewhoae. |
| Sora Inu-chan 2008-02-19 ch 10, | abuseThis is absolutely fabulous, I've been hard pressed for some good GaaraxSakura fics and I have to say that I have found them in all of your amazingly fantastic writings. Your level of writing is such a welcome relief and its wonderful to read a story that doesn't follow so closely with what the Gaara/Sakura fandom usually entails. I love your stories and this one is just one of those that make you smile for weeks and weeks afterward. I lurved you :D |
| animegirl_808 2008-01-21 ch 6, anon. | abuseI love this one!U have good stories.Write more |
| RomanceIsMyDoom 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHAH -gasp-HAHAHAHAHA I don't really know why I find this so absurdly funny, but perhaps the image of Gaara - fully decked in kage robes, standing in line for ICE CREAM, with a flirtateous girl a good decade or so younger standing next to him - makes it a lot harder to keep a straight face. |
| Pharos Hyaline 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseThe only problem with the ice cream things is that Gaara would get really fat. Jenny Craig would have an awesome new spokesperson though. |
| Animeprincess514 2007-12-16 ch 7, | abuseso he still has that demon huh? ok then ltes see i give it a 100/5 hehe just cuz i like the couple jk jk ts becuase u did GREAT! |
| Animeprincess514 2007-12-16 ch 6, | abusethoughtvit was very good if you ask me i think you should work better on your spacing but other then that itwas very good |
| Animeprincess514 2007-12-16 ch 2, | abusevery... interesting i like the word tummy idk y but i do it was a great story though |
| Dilated Peoples 2007-11-19 ch 10, | abusehey, hey, hey, hey! I LOVE THIS! and if it's alright...i have a request. Uh... can you make so that Sakura get's sick or something, and her symptoms are that of being pregnant, and then she takes a test and it says she is, and then she takes another one, and it says she isnt and the whole time gaara is like, freaking out, and then, and then, and then, and then, and then... and then... you can do whatever you want from there, because like, it's your story, but it would SO TOTALY make my day if you did this. OMGSH PLEASE!?!?!?!?!@?!? I LOVE YOU MARRY ME :D! lol. not really, but i do have a lot of respect for you. |
| aquitaineq 2007-11-17 ch 10, | abuseI really love these one shots. I hope a future chapter might give us a glimpse into Tenten's recovery! |
| ozzgirl21 2007-11-06 ch 4, anon. | abusethis is such an awesome story! Gaara is my fav please continue to write more naruto and vampire hunter D stories. |
| Suna Babe 2007-10-31 ch 10, anon. | abuseWOW...that was the BEST fanfic i've ever read...your story combines my two most favorite hobbies together perfectly! i love reading romance novels & i'm also super addicted to Naruto manga and anime...i've just recently discovered the world of fanfics about Naruto characters, and i've been hooked ever since...i have to say that "Equilibrium" is by far the most developed fanfic i've read so far...the way you stay true to Gaara's characteristics based on the anime while developing his personality in a very realistic way to emphasize his emotional growth is amazing...i can truly imagine that your story can possibly fit with Kishimoto's story line...i've always been pro-NarutoxSakura, but after reading your story, you have very effectively got me rooting for GaaraxSakura now (sorry Naruto ^_^)...THANK YOU so much for your writings...i hope you'll continue writing stories about Gaara and Sakura...can't wait to read them! =)take care... P.S. just wanted to included some constructive criticism = more proofreading for grammatical errors wouldn't hurt ^_^ Sincerely, Suna_Babe423 |
| scribbles-in-the-margins 2007-10-27 ch 10, | abuseIts been a while since I've commented on anythin, but I just reread all 10 chapters of this -- well actually read the last 2 for the first time. I just wanted to say again how much I adore how you write gaara, but recently I've come to appeciate how you write Sakura even more. How you portay her is so intense. She isn't weak, she isn't stupid, but she isn't cut off either. She is so very uch alive. Thank you for posting this so we can read it. |
| -SMILING.ROSE 2007-10-26 ch 10, | abuseWoah, that was a pretty sad chapter. Well, I hope you add another one. I love the stories. :) |