 Lumiere 2006-08-29 . chapter 4Update soon purty please! |
 Jak0TheShadows 2006-08-23 . chapter 4Whee! |
 White Butterfly 2006-08-03 . chapter 4Aww! I want to know what he's thinking... |
 Renneh 2006-07-14 . chapter 3I don't need to breathe, yet I think I'm holding my breath...
SQUEE! That's so awesome. I love Al and Martel together! But I think Martel is like quite a few years older than Al... who gives a crap though! |
 Jak0TheShadows 2006-06-03 . chapter 3Ah! I love it! It's short but sweet. Quick and easy to read but lovely and for only half the battle hee hee hee!
CONTINUE PLEASE! |
 White Butterfly 2006-03-25 . chapter 3Al and Marda. Love this pairing. And while the chapters are short, they're fabulous and well edited. |
 Domenic 2006-03-17 . chapter 1Oh, Al/Martel!
(Greedslayer from the LJ comm. by the way...and should totally transfer this there.) |
 Anna Strife0211 2006-03-17 . chapter 2OMG!! I loved it... this is really good. You should translate more of this Al/Martel fics to spanish.
Again you did an awesome job
Take care and see ya |
 Wild Wolf Fire 2006-03-17 . chapter 2Aw so cute.I love this paring a lot. I hope you update soon please. |
 Edhelith 2006-03-17 . chapter 1 First off, let me say that it is wonderful to find a story with Al/Martel interaction (or, actually, just a story featuring Martel-that's pretty rare).
Also, the idea that she became partly ectothermic after being turned into a chimera is clever and interesting twist I hadn't even considered. But it just makes sense that her natural systems would clash more with her invasive system than Dorochette's or Law's, their chimera halves at least being mammalian.
So, if I haven't been clear enough, please, please continue soon! |