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diresphinx
2008-07-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseI enjoyed the scenarios you've presented in this piece, especially how Hiruma teaches Mamori to swear. That just makes me smile. And it would so be Hiruma to make cursing in your ear a turn-on. Great work.
youma06402
2008-05-15
ch 1, anon.
abusethis is a good piece :) I just hope you continue making HiruMamo.

(please do)
sellega
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abuseI love how close they grow over the years. This was really sweet and put a big smile on my face.
Anonymous
2007-09-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseNice. All I can say is, nice. Who am I kidding, that was great!! Keep at it!!
Larethiana
2007-02-17
ch 1,
abuseSO CUTE! pretty good! your way of write is uncluttered and very precise at the same time... Your transmit situation's emotions so clearly... I'm a great fan of your stories. Please...write again with this pairing!
Verna-S
2007-02-13
ch 1,
abuseThe prose in these bitlets is just gorgeous. Poetic little snatches of... I don't know. Realism? I like the eccentricity.
Sandri
2007-01-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseLoved it. It was funny, sweet, and deliciously in-character.

You rule.
dragonsnap
2006-12-14
ch 1,
abuseLove, love, love, love it.

It's Hiruma and Mamori perfection, which is so very hard to pull off realistically.
sarah
2006-10-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseLOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!i love tis pairing. good job. make another one please and thank u .
Chranze
2006-07-27
ch 1,
abuseI loved reading this! As a big fan of HiruMamo I really enjoyed it.
Nekotsume
2006-05-26
ch 1,
abuseWow...that's a nice atmosphere. -^__^- And you managed to write a Hiruma pairing without him being OOC! About the first one I've seen... (He's a great, great character, but what makes him great also makes him hard to write, I think.) Nice job. X)
astig3422
2006-03-16
ch 1,
abusecool story i love it!please keep writing!!you rock!
RiskyJR737
2006-03-16
ch 1,
abuseUpdate pronto! Now! Soon! Imediatly! Please!
eliza-natsuko
2006-03-16
ch 1,
abuseAHH~ *hearts everywhere*
that was very sweet!!
hope you'll write more and thanks for such a sweet fic!
ZZZzzzzzz
2006-03-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseI can't express how happy reading this made me.

It's perfect.
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