I like the story. Please hurry and finish fixing other chapters, I would like to know what happens

Please hurry with putting the revised further chapters up as this is a brilliant story and I can't wait to read more!

I liked your old story, but this write is much smoother. The action is much faster, and makes for an interesting read. I'm assuming the personalities will be flushed out as you go on. Thanks for all your effort, and I look forward to more.

What!?! What just happened? What?

That is a really intersting idea. I never thought of that before. It certainly make me curious.

Liking this much better.

Ayala hm. Now why in Doni's name does that seem like such a familiar name. And even Cardonlo seems to ring a faint bell.

I like the beggining part how you conveyed that the Lord Holder didn't like the dragonrider very much. Well written!

I have to agree with the other reviewer. I couldn't help it. I saw the name Skydra and went, "Uh-oh." But she looks promising so far! She's obvisually been abused, but isn't a cheerful little myrter. In fact, she seems rather emotionally damaged. Good job! hee!

Now I know I haven't read this before because I don't know what just happened at the end or why with the cliff hanger. Did a dragon just die? Please continue!

I don't remember reading this before, so I think it might be the first time for me!

The first part of the scenes are good, but when you find you're having short blurbs during the intros you may want to just cut them out. For instance, this fic could have started with the Weyrwomen having a discussion on what to do. Throw in a little backstory and walla!

I think the second part is good ad created a heightened sense of drama with the queens both having issues with clutching near one another, but I find it hard to believe that these two responsible women would just sort of shrug their shoulders and decide to do nothing. After all, just a few weeks ago they were worried the queens would rip each other apart.

But in all I did like this first chapter! On to the second!

Wow, I really love your story so far...but that EVIL cliffhanger! Please, put us all out of our misery and update soon! I can't wait to read more!!

I'm sorry you're ending this story. So many things to say yet!! Please consider a sequel - this was an interersting story. Thanks for writing it, I'll look for other works of yours.

I was just browsing through random stories (I haven't been a regular here since well before AMC fanfic was kosher), and came across one with 'Sky' as part of the main character's name. So, I thought to myself, I'll bet she's a complete Mary Sue who either has or will get a gold, and is HAD or the like. I clicked to see if I'd be right.

I was surprised; it's nowhere near as poorly written as the name of the MC would suggest (I read up through 5). In fact, it isn't bad. I'd recommend changing that name, though--you can probably see why.

A very good story. Thank you!! I think they were on a different planet, because they couldn't eat the food.

Great story - I'll look for more of your writing - please continue - you have a great ability!!

I think it's good, what books is it over though. Could it be my beloved Eragon?

an excellent story. Very sad though, i was crying through it! but it all turned out ok. I would have loved to know more about Skydra's childhood and more details about where they were but yes, if you do get bored of writting a book i guess its hard to make it good. Thankyou for such an enjoying read.
(My heart actually soared through the Impression)