Your ending to epilogue didn;t make me cry as much as the last one, but it's so great. The line "Kaien and Renji are there..." made me choke up a bit though. It's all so beautiful and sweet. Thank you for doing that.

Haha the alternate for Epilogue sounds so much like Advent Children, no offense though but it does to me...

I've read your other fic 'Epilogue.' It was angsty. I shed tears reading it, especially ch7. I'm glad you wrote an alternate version to that story ^_^

Adding you to my fav author's list.

More people should review this. These are really good. I thought that this chapter was particularly adorable. Keep up the good work!

--Iteria

The last line made me feel all warm and fuzzy. ^__^ I love every single one of these alternate endings!

it seems there's no end to this tragedy. i've read your other "dissonance" story and it made me so darn sad (being an ichiruki schmuck that i am). but this alternate one gave me the goosebumps, the story has become a japanese horror flick of some sort where the "evil" manifestation simply refuses to die. Or was it more like "The Exorcist" though I don't think Yuzu would jump out of the window to avoid getting possessed. *sigh* It's always the quiet and sweet ones ne? Ok, I've blabbered too much. Good work. Keep it up!

good stuff, enjoyed it much so.

There are more than a thousand ways to end a story.

This one gave me the goosebumps.

Cool.

Indeed, there is more than a thousand ways to end a story.

Recommendation: If Ishida and Orihime are involved, Ishida should call her "Inoue-san" and Orihime should call him "Ishida-kun".

I can't say the same for the last line.

Anyways, your story is great. Just keep on updating and you'll do fine.