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| speed and write 2008-07-03 ch 1,  | abuseThat's sweet. |
| wayau2006 2008-05-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis one is nice and unique. |
| Bishieluver01 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseAw... I loved that ending! Sweet little oneshot you made. :) |
| Verna-S 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseI usually don't like song fics but you carried this one out so well. I especially enjoyed the fact that Hiruma could barely get the words out. I really have issues with seeing him using the "l" word unless he's being sarcastic or talking about weapons or football or some abstract non-organic object or concept. The fact that you wrote something romantic without letting it get out of character, I enjoyed that. :) |
| Larethiana 2007-02-17 ch 1, | abuseYA! (hysteric voice) so cute! I realy adore your story! Oh please...write again so beautifyls stories like that! thanks to make us dreaming! |
| Amane 2006-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseSorry, my english isn't very good ( because I'm french ) but I read your text and I found it wonderfull ! It's a big surprise to see Hiruma with humans feelings ^_^ ! Good job, Yaa-ha ! |
| Chranze 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuseGreat one-shot! simply Loved it!! |
| chibi-chan 2006-07-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg!can u believe it...hiruma just actually confess his true filling which does not look like himself!sweet,so sweet...love it! |
| kakashisninjadogs 2006-03-26 ch 1, | abuseCutesy To dang bad it'll never happen in the series darn! |
| Logrus Mage 2006-03-25 ch 1, | abuseLoved Avenue Q. Loved this fic. Enough said. |
| dittogrrl 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseAh...your story is so sweet. HiruMamo is my favorite pairing in Eyeshield 21. Sorry I can't give you any criticism, but it was really good. Really... |
| Crash 2006-03-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI went on limewire, and downloaded the song the first time i read this. Dude you suck, I almost cried. XC It was sad. But I loved it! Good Job. T_T |
| Iris 2006-03-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG! O_O that was so great!... sad but great in a way. ^_^ |
| Yue-neko 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abuseWow thtas so sad, but so satisfing! This is what they call bittersweet (i think) keep up the gerat work! Yue |
| Kaitune 2006-03-17 ch 1, | abuseDamn... This is GOOD! This is just... so right! The character of Hirama/Mamori and everything! Hiruma is so mean and cute at the same time, especially when he confessed the reason for weekend-practice and finally trying to say "I love you" >/< PLZ WRITE SOMEMORE! |