Wo!

I think you should do another sotry but make chris more useful like turn him into a super cyborg like deus ex

6 so far wanted a contiuation.

With me, that makes 7.

I have just read nothing like this. Ever.

Just what are you doing writing fanfictions? Why aren't you writing proper stories?

Nice reaction at the end!

Hm... What's the betting that Sonic somehow comes back hm?

Dark Spine Sonic?

Why did you choose Dark Spine Sonic?

Hyper Sonic Huh?

Out of all the things you had to have him transform into...

Okay, what on earth... no, what the hell... No AGH
JUST WHAT IS GERALD UP TO!

That guy is the same guy who is the only villain to have killed Sonic

'yes I am evi'

Not evil.

Just a writer.

Silver huh?

The guy who appeared in Sonic The Hedgehog game

Uh oh...

Them?

What are those 'air riders' doing?

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Well... Wow. Way past geeky.

Definetelly two much ingredients in the cauldron but ephic none the less... Just one thing: you didn't explain the connection between Prometheus and Angel Island.

Apart from that.

Wow.