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| pupshaw21 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abusegreat story i also im a fan of advent...When i fist got the game from my family i said " Man this is going to be a bad game"...Boy was i wrong I think that your story was cool! |
| kYdizzle 2007-07-17 ch 6, | abusethis is good, love the game as well been a while since you last updated, so... please update soon story in my favs |
| Kamron 2006-08-11 ch 6, anon. | abuseWell hello there! Nice to see that your alive lol :) anyways this story is starting to get better and better AND better so yeah uh keep up the good work and take care cya later! |
| Joseph Rosario 2006-08-07 ch 6, anon. | abuseplease write more I loved the games story and I am saddened that there will not be a sequal to the story so you are our only hope for an ending for this great drama. |
| zombiewolf 2006-07-29 ch 6, | abusevary nice. keep up the good work, but dont take to long just on the ship. |
| TheMadHatter577 2006-07-28 ch 6, | abuseGood Chapter. I was hoping to see some powers developing but, I guess we'll have to wait a chapter or two. Keep up the hard work. :) |
| Kamron.G.Thibodeaux 2006-07-13 ch 5, anon. | abuseAwesome Fic Hope you Post another Chapter Awesome Job |
| Holden 2006-07-09 ch 5, anon. | abuseOlafur, I have just come back across the few Advent Rising fics there. I was pleasantly surprised to find this gem that you have written. I hope that you update it soon. I getting very interested in it. Holden |
| zombiewolf 2006-04-30 ch 5, | abuseanother good one. keep up the pace. Your Lord and Master ~Zombie Wolf |
| TheMadHatter577 2006-04-30 ch 5, | abuseGood Chapter. You seem to be becoming adept with the subtle cliffhanger. Can't wait for the Next! :) |
| zombiewolf 2006-04-23 ch 2, | abuseAlso I hope that you make Cain's powers completly different frome Gideon's just to keep things fresh. Your Lord and Master ~Zombie Wolf |
| zombiewolf 2006-04-23 ch 4, | abuseexcellent. I hope that your next post is faster than the last, because there is vary little fanfiction for this game and yours is the only good one. Your Lord and Master ~Zombie Wolf |
| TheMadHatter577 2006-04-23 ch 4, | abuseWow. Another great cliffhanger chapter! I can't wait see Cain's powers. Did Indigo Prophecy influence the name of the main character? Lucas Kaine-Caine? Thanks for taking the time to make this excellent fic. |
| Adrian 2006-04-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseNice one.. plz keep on writing;) |
| zombiewolf 2006-03-25 ch 3, | abuseim liking this story post soon. Your Lord and Master ~Zombie Wolf |