great story i also im a fan of advent...When i fist got the game from my family i said " Man this is going to be a bad game"...Boy was i wrong I think that your story was cool!

this is good, love the game as well

been a while since you last updated, so... please update soon

story in my favs

Well hello there! Nice to see that your alive lol :) anyways this story is starting to get better and better AND better so yeah uh keep up the good work and take care cya later!

please write more I loved the games story and I am saddened that there will not be a sequal to the story so you are our only hope for an ending for this great drama.

vary nice. keep up the good work, but dont take to long just on the ship.

Good Chapter. I was hoping to see some powers developing but, I guess we'll have to wait a chapter or two. Keep up the hard work. :)

Awesome Fic Hope you Post another Chapter Awesome Job

Olafur, I have just come back across the few Advent Rising fics there. I was pleasantly surprised to find this gem that you have written. I hope that you update it soon. I getting very interested in it.

Holden

another good one. keep up the pace.

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Zombie Wolf

Good Chapter. You seem to be becoming adept with the subtle cliffhanger. Can't wait for the Next! :)

Also I hope that you make Cain's powers completly different frome Gideon's just to keep things fresh.

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Zombie Wolf

excellent. I hope that your next post is faster than the last, because there is vary little fanfiction for this game and yours is the only good one.

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Zombie Wolf

Wow. Another great cliffhanger chapter! I can't wait see Cain's powers. Did Indigo Prophecy influence the name of the main character? Lucas Kaine-Caine? Thanks for taking the time to make this excellent fic.

Nice one.. plz keep on writing;)

im liking this story post soon.

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Zombie Wolf