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pupshaw21
2008-02-17
ch 1,
abusegreat story i also im a fan of advent...When i fist got the game from my family i said " Man this is going to be a bad game"...Boy was i wrong I think that your story was cool!
kYdizzle
2007-07-17
ch 6,
abusethis is good, love the game as well

been a while since you last updated, so... please update soon

story in my favs
Kamron
2006-08-11
ch 6, anon.
abuseWell hello there! Nice to see that your alive lol :) anyways this story is starting to get better and better AND better so yeah uh keep up the good work and take care cya later!
Joseph Rosario
2006-08-07
ch 6, anon.
abuseplease write more I loved the games story and I am saddened that there will not be a sequal to the story so you are our only hope for an ending for this great drama.
zombiewolf
2006-07-29
ch 6,
abusevary nice. keep up the good work, but dont take to long just on the ship.
TheMadHatter577
2006-07-28
ch 6,
abuseGood Chapter. I was hoping to see some powers developing but, I guess we'll have to wait a chapter or two. Keep up the hard work. :)
Kamron.G.Thibodeaux
2006-07-13
ch 5, anon.
abuseAwesome Fic Hope you Post another Chapter Awesome Job
Holden
2006-07-09
ch 5, anon.
abuseOlafur, I have just come back across the few Advent Rising fics there. I was pleasantly surprised to find this gem that you have written. I hope that you update it soon. I getting very interested in it.

Holden
zombiewolf
2006-04-30
ch 5,
abuseanother good one. keep up the pace.

Your Lord and Master
~Zombie Wolf
TheMadHatter577
2006-04-30
ch 5,
abuseGood Chapter. You seem to be becoming adept with the subtle cliffhanger. Can't wait for the Next! :)
zombiewolf
2006-04-23
ch 2,
abuseAlso I hope that you make Cain's powers completly different frome Gideon's just to keep things fresh.

Your Lord and Master
~Zombie Wolf
zombiewolf
2006-04-23
ch 4,
abuseexcellent. I hope that your next post is faster than the last, because there is vary little fanfiction for this game and yours is the only good one.

Your Lord and Master
~Zombie Wolf
TheMadHatter577
2006-04-23
ch 4,
abuseWow. Another great cliffhanger chapter! I can't wait see Cain's powers. Did Indigo Prophecy influence the name of the main character? Lucas Kaine-Caine? Thanks for taking the time to make this excellent fic.
Adrian
2006-04-16
ch 3, anon.
abuseNice one.. plz keep on writing;)
zombiewolf
2006-03-25
ch 3,
abuseim liking this story post soon.

Your Lord and Master
~Zombie Wolf
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