why dont you cast all the other books into your plot too?
i will love to read them all.

at the end of the chapter, i am getting goosebumps.
somehow i find your wrapping up of the wormtail episode better than jkr's.

the part where draco saves harry and realises about the horcruxes is simply wonderful.
i thing the whole thing is shaping up beautifully.

ginny should have been told a bit more, i think.

you really got into fred and george's characters.

i could have done with some jusei suice in s.c.'s class (s.m.'s too)

ollivander popping up in that forest ties up a few loose ends...hmm.

the poem in the beginning reminded me of the sorting hat's song.

“There are really no such things as zyphyrabingites. I made that up to buy time.”
- HAHAHA HA HA HA

"And it’s always polite to make appointments before visiting lords and ladies"
what a line!!

Mathomites - thats a new one.

i was hoping kreacher will visit harry in the midnight when he is in the hospital

my god! you can rival dan brown in this chapter!

things are getting really interesting now.
the image of the cake-cream floating on neville's blood was quite grotesque.

miranda took, how careless are you to leave poor neville back there in the burrow?